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03-05-06, 09:57 PM
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Killin' G'z
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IP: 668E 7881
Voted For: TaShay
TaShay: hiz Nigga Talk Shyt, till hiz head Leak..// the only way u spitt heat it with ya dick, Cuz u stay with Diseases..// 3/10 - Weak Opener. Put ya 'DiCk in ya Hand' and see how much uz fucking yaself..// Battling me u trying ta 'come hard' so u can play with yaself..// 2/10 - Stupid. Your gonna need the Magic stick, cuz thatz the only way u can 'fuck Wit me'..// I Swallow ya lyrics, guess that'll be ya first 'Deep Throat Defeat..// 5/10 - 2nd line was good, first didnt even rhyme with 2nd. Ya life is a Done Deal, U've already Comitted SuiCide..// Da CloCk Stopped Stop TiCking, ByTcH ur Lifez outta Time..// 2/10 - Weak Closer. 12/40 You had a pretty weak verse, you lacked strong punches and good wordplay, your vocab was also weak. Buddy Boi: Hello Tashay Da is names Buddy Boi so dont u 4get it because after this battle gurl u gone let me hit it 3/10 - Weak Opener. Ma dick gone be like a drug and have u addicted i gone you fucked up ta whereas u cant fix it 2/10 - Weak. cause u slut and ya cant help but drink da nut i'll ya walk crooked and stupid cuz i fucd u n da but 2/10 - Lame. Hav ya tellin ya boyfriend da marks on ya but is papa cuts bitch u dirty i sendin u to da fuckin pound ya mut 2/10 - Stupid. leave ya dere have you fiendin fo ma nut time fo me ta me end and give u ya nut through a straw 2/10- Whack. 11/50 You had a very weak verse, your punches were shitty as hell, your personals were fake, you need to work on your rhymes. OVERALL - I give my vote to Shay becuz she had the better rhymes and her punches where hitten harder. She also used a better flow. Buddy you used stupid ass punches becuz she was a girl, and they were whack as fuck! You need to use more creative shit and up your vocab. Vote - TaShay
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03-05-06, 09:58 PM
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Killin' G'z
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IP: 668E 7881
Return the Fav is sig sometime please!
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TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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03-05-06, 10:50 PM
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IP: 60FE 5834
why thank you...for the critique.... Keep it Moving...
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 ~*~ Open Micz In Need of Feed~*~ Tashay n BonaFide Collab FreeStyle.. I LaunCh RoCketz Da Size Of CoCk Pitz../LyRiCists only "Cum QuiCk" with a "DilDo" and a Sex "FliCk"..// |
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03-06-06, 09:51 PM
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IP: 5021 8C8D
Voted For: Buddy Boi
ok some lines neav rymed fo both of ya but i voted fo bubby cus he had the punches and thats why u guys were even every wheres else elavate for both of u Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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03-07-06, 12:23 AM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 8DD6 877D
Voted For: Buddy Boi
i have to say he took this.................just had a better flow and harder punches.......ain't got time to break it down more Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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03-07-06, 11:33 PM
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IP: 60FE 5834
all hell naw...votes dont count.....shyt aint explained......
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~*~ Open Micz In Need of Feed~*~ Tashay n BonaFide Collab FreeStyle.. I LaunCh RoCketz Da Size Of CoCk Pitz../LyRiCists only "Cum QuiCk" with a "DilDo" and a Sex "FliCk"..// |
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03-08-06, 07:06 PM
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IP: 676B 9D48
Voted For: TaShay
This is was a horrible battle, buddy, you have no understanding of battling...you had horrible structure, very few, and weak metaphors...no personals what so ever, the punchlines were god awful....that was a disgrace of a verse... TaShay, yours wasn't much better, but you alteast did show some understanding of battling....the first bar....showed some significance in the metaphor/punchline area....the 2nd bar was a little better, the third bar was better than the first two, and the closer was horrible....don't get me wrong, none of this was good....but you def outshined buddy....
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We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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03-08-06, 11:11 PM
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IP: 60FE 5834
lmao....i now see that my closer, was the wackest thing i coulda ever keyed...haha....but thankz though for the critique...much appreciated...
damn, this shoulda been a 3-0 KO.... but newayz..uP!
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~*~ Open Micz In Need of Feed~*~ Tashay n BonaFide Collab FreeStyle.. I LaunCh RoCketz Da Size Of CoCk Pitz../LyRiCists only "Cum QuiCk" with a "DilDo" and a Sex "FliCk"..// |
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03-09-06, 05:15 PM
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IP: 60FE 5834
hugh...............................up up and away..
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03-09-06, 05:35 PM
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IP: 8377 791D
Voted For: TaShay
Thiz Nigga Talk Shyt, till hiz head Leak..// the only way u spitt heat it with ya dick, Cuz u stay with Diseases..// ^ Nah, it didnt even rhyme boo.... Put ya 'DiCk in ya Hand' and see how much uz fucking yaself..// Battling me u trying ta 'come hard' so u can play with yaself..// ^ Thats a little bit better...you gettin warmed up.. Your gonna need the Magic stick, cuz thatz the only way u can 'fuck Wit me'..// I Swallow ya lyrics, guess that'll be ya first 'Deep Throat Defeat..// ^ Sort of played, but it made me laugh soe....pretty decent yo. Ya life is a Done Deal, U've already Comitted SuiCide..// Da CloCk Stopped Stop TiCking, ByTcH ur Lifez outta Time..// ^ Nah, I wasnt feelin that... Hello Tashay Da is names Buddy Boi so dont u 4get it because after this battle gurl u gone let me hit it ^ No lol Ma dick gone be like a drug and have u addicted i gone you fucked up ta whereas u cant fix it ^ Nope, Didnt even make sense to me lol cause u slut and ya cant help but drink da nut i'll ya walk crooked and stupid cuz i fucd u n da but ^ You sound like Bizzarre from d12 or somthin. Hav ya tellin ya boyfriend da marks on ya but is papa cuts bitch u dirty i sendin u to da fuckin pound ya mut ^ Thats not even rhymin...your basically just cussing at her, thats lame, yo. leave ya dere have you fiendin fo ma nut time fo me ta me end and give u ya nut through a straw ^ that didnt rhyme, and it was weak anyway. Not the strongest battle right here.... Tay...girl, your structure game is messed up shorty, Dont seperate bars like that....ya some dope ideas in your rhymes tho, Just need to work on hittin your oppenent harder with some killa punchlines. Buddy, To me your verse was just like a joke or somthin'...Didnt have no punches, no flow, no personals...I didnt like anythin atall in your verse Tay got this by landslide.. good lookin homegirl, stay up.
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03-09-06, 07:37 PM
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IP: AE9A FDA1
o well i lost......................
i hate text...........
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03-11-06, 11:32 AM
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IP: 60FE 5834
Come on and finish this shyt....ill return favorz....plz...thankkz..
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03-11-06, 09:03 PM
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IP: 933F CFA5
Voted For: TaShay
This was a terrible battle. I give TaShay my vote, and probably tha win because she had the most and better disses in there. TaShay-I think you had better disses in your verse that your oponent, thats why I gave you my vote but I think you should work on better wordplay and more creativitie and actually making since in your verses. I seen you repeatin tha same thing. Only time it would be ight is if your verse was actually nice and your bars were making since. I saw way too many sexual lines in there that werent hard hitting at all. Any below average person on this site would've won this battle. Buddy-First off, you had a major chance to take this battle and run with it, but you didnt. I read TaShay's verse first and wasn't feeling it so that gives you wayy more credibility because I want you to come at least a lil bit harder so I can give you my vote, but you didnt do that. I think you should just come up with good disses. That's tha only thing battling is, is dissing your oponent. Fuck what these people on this site say, I been on this site since 2003, (different name), and I been in over 50 battles and won 75% of those because I thought of some creative disses. Your opening line should always catch your voters attention, if your first couple bars are wack, thats guna say a lot...and alway spread out ur verses, because it makes it look like thats hella reading to be doing, and no one wants to be reading. Just come up with disses and make embarass your oponent as good as you can, and I garuntee you will always come out on top. Overall-This was a weak battle in my opinion to say tha least. I think you both should work on disses and creative wordplay.
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