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Old 05-05-08, 09:48 PM   #1
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d523 vs Intangible

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Old 05-05-08, 09:48 PM   #2
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Old 05-05-08, 10:02 PM   #3
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Old 05-05-08, 10:28 PM   #4
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Bet This Kid’s An Online Nerd With Spectacles, Get Hit Spittin Fiction Thats Wack
My Words Take This Bitch To The Ground And Give Tang A Real Kick In The Glass
Intangible Stays With Them Lines That Were The Shit In The Times of a Castle War
D Spits That Dope Shit, 1 Hit Make His Head Spin In Circles Like His Fucking Avatar
You’ll Never Twist Me Up, Like You Were Pissing In Cups, Your Rap Vision Just Sucks, So Listen Up
Soon You O-1, Wilson Get That I Don’t Have To Crash A Wedding For U To Know This Bitch Is Fucked?


quick 20 minute written shit..
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Old 05-05-08, 10:31 PM   #5
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I'm tired of reading all your wack and aimless spittin
Your shit isn't hot, so for me there aint no way to listen
It's harder to read, than escaping from an escapeless prison
Why am I battling this fag, he aint even in my weight division
Now this pussy right here is thinking of some words to say
But i can think of my words to murder this gay, in like thirty ways
I'm gonna finish this dude, like a thirsty kid and a capri sun
d532 is so fuckin fat, just readin the last line made him need one
You say your famous, but dog i havent seen your ass in cyberspace
I think its easy to say that this whole entire place is trying to hide your face
I thought this fagget got banned, god damn i'm tired of this random shit
Only time this fag could get a win, is if I just fuckin handed him it
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Old 05-05-08, 11:05 PM   #6
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Old 05-06-08, 09:00 AM   #7
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This was feedback posted for Intangible

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dude your fucking whack, Tha Kid Natt....good try and making another account
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Old 05-06-08, 03:22 PM   #8
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who the fuck is tha kid nate...

im whack soo lets battle bitch...

but i doubt u will bc u suck
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Old 05-06-08, 05:30 PM   #9
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Voted For: Intangible

D523
Bet This Kid’s An Online Nerd With Spectacles, Get Hit Spittin Fiction Thats Wack
My Words Take This Bitch To The Ground And Give Tang A Real Kick In The Glass
~did not get this line at all, please explain. wont change my vote but at least ill know what you meant~

Intangible Stays With Them Lines That Were The Shit In The Times of a Castle War
D Spits That Dope Shit, 1 Hit Make His Head Spin In Circles Like His Fucking Avatar
~a weak punch, almost hit is mark but way to basic~

You’ll Never Twist Me Up, Like You Were Pissing In Cups, Your Rap Vision Just Sucks, So Listen Up
Soon You O-1, Wilson Get That I Don’t Have To Crash A Wedding For U To Know This Bitch Is Fucked?
~ya best line good wordplay. still not a great line, but if the rest of ya verses was on this level, yo got the win esily~

Intangible
I'm tired of reading all your wack and aimless spittin
Your shit isn't hot, so for me there aint no way to listen
~wack line, not even sure if i can call it a punch but...yea~

It's harder to read, than escaping from an escapeless prison
Why am I battling this fag, he aint even in my weight division
~probably the most played line in battlin history~

Now this pussy right here is thinking of some words to say
But i can think of my words to murder this gay, in like thirty ways
~about as effective as ya opener~

I'm gonna finish this dude, like a thirsty kid and a capri sun
d532 is so fuckin fat, just readin the last line made him need one
~an ok punch, an empty one with no kind of proof to back it up but still ok~

You say your famous, but dog i havent seen your ass in cyberspace
I think its easy to say that this whole entire place is trying to hide your face
~another played line~

I thought this fagget got banned, god damn i'm tired of this random shit
Only time this fag could get a win, is if I just fuckin handed him it
~weak ass finisher, but you gotta respect that he's new and still attempted to do his homework on th opponent~




the only reason im givin the win to intangible is be cause while 90 percent of his lines was below average at best, 2 out of 3 of D's bars were non existant. if he wouldve hit you with at least one more line as effective as his finisher, you wouldve lost quickly. a close battle, not a very entertaining one, but close none the less.
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Old 05-06-08, 05:33 PM   #10
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Quote:
Originally Posted by King_Aphilly
dude your fucking whack, Tha Kid Natt....good try and making another account


lmao didnt even notice that. yo u got the same ip and you're both from mass? big coincidence lol. good try. and i was giving you props for doing ya homework. no wonder u knew about the banning contreversy
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Old 05-08-08, 02:43 AM   #11
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I'm tired of reading all your wack and aimless spittin
Your shit isn't hot, so for me there aint no way to listen
decent opener 6/10
It's harder to read, than escaping from an escapeless prison
Why am I battling this fag, he aint even in my weight division
decent 5/10
Now this pussy right here is thinking of some words to say
But i can think of my words to murder this gay, in like thirty ways liked the multi 5.5/10
I'm gonna finish this dude, like a thirsty kid and a capri sun
d532 is so fuckin fat, just readin the last line made him need one decent 5/10
You say your famous, but dog i havent seen your ass in cyberspace
I think its easy to say that this whole entire place is trying to hide your face.. best line right here i liked the multie 7/10
I thought this fagget got banned, god damn i'm tired of this random shit
Only time this fag could get a win, is if I just fuckin handed him it filler 3/10
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d523
just felt like you rambled on really fast off the top of the dome and didnt think about anything you said..
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Old 05-12-08, 08:45 PM   #12
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uppin this bitchhh
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Old 05-15-08, 01:13 PM   #13
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Ight I like this verse better because it had nice wordplay and punchlines were harder...
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Old 05-18-08, 08:01 PM   #14
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uppin this bitchhhh cmon vote
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Old 05-18-08, 08:15 PM   #15
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d5:
Bet This Kid’s An Online Nerd With Spectacles, Get Hit Spittin Fiction Thats Wack
My Words Take This Bitch To The Ground And Give Tang A Real Kick In The Glass
3/5 - decent.
Intangible Stays With Them Lines That Were The Shit In The Times of a Castle War
D Spits That Dope Shit, 1 Hit Make His Head Spin In Circles Like His Fucking Avatar
2/5 - meh
You’ll Never Twist Me Up, Like You Were Pissing In Cups, Your Rap Vision Just Sucks, So Listen Up
Soon You O-1, Wilson Get That I Don’t Have To Crash A Wedding For U To Know This Bitch Is Fucked?
2/5 - meh.
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Intangible:
I'm tired of reading all your wack and aimless spittin
Your shit isn't hot, so for me there aint no way to listen
1/5 - meh.
It's harder to read, than escaping from an escapeless prison
Why am I battling this fag, he aint even in my weight division
2/5 - meh.
Now this pussy right here is thinking of some words to say
But i can think of my words to murder this gay, in like thirty ways
3/5 - decent multi's.
I'm gonna finish this dude, like a thirsty kid and a capri sun
d532 is so fuckin fat, just readin the last line made him need one
1/5 - no.
You say your famous, but dog i havent seen your ass in cyberspace
I think its easy to say that this whole entire place is trying to hide your face
0/5 - lmao.
I thought this fagget got banned, god damn i'm tired of this random shit
Only time this fag could get a win, is if I just fuckin handed him it
3/5 - decent closer.
10/30
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