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03-11-09, 12:02 AM | #16 | |||||||
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Voted For: Da Problem Child
See the problem is your style is bringing flip,jump and skip but u aint got this won, coz you may just be a child but no-one round here has heard of BATTLE-NASTICS SON. ehh, decent name play but i juss dont get the punch... maybe its just me Bitch you got things twisted, i look at your ryhme scheme but musta missed it, Coz yeah i see it and dissed it but still if it was a building it would be listed. this was okay, good flow and a decent punch, but a little forced... work on the delivery my dood This battle iv pissed it, the trophy iv already kissed it, u admit u have problems but u loved it so much u tried to fist it. okay, decent concept... good nameplay, but the set up was a filler and the punch is weak Yes your lame n, i dont wonna be the 1 your blame'n but its wack your demonstrating,your read makes me feel its raining. not really a punch, and if it is, its not hard hitting... take this line out like a target and come with a dope punch... this seemed like filler material to me Where the fuck u at kid? coz really i dont know.... coz i need to lines of snow to try follow your flow. this was pretty weak, it doesn't really hit hard and not a good closer His trash can rhymes dont even deserve a desent punchline itz amazing how you can be on so many peoples dicks at one-time ehh not a good opener and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man okay, played concept though. its so indifficult to stop this clown-from-breathing im suprise he's found time to challenge me, the porn sites must be down-this-evening you rhymes'-desieving i'd father this sucker but from that time-consieving, how did you escape from the rubber eh. good flow, a bit stretched... the punch was kinda weak and a little forced... a better delievery could have saved this line its only fair to come hard as wood, because he couldn't scrape-of blisters so i'll slay him like a jew, and im Adolf-Hitler okay, decent punch but kind of a played concept... closer material tho so points for that In my opinion, this was a weak battle for ya'll... i've seen both come with a lot better shit. This was a tough decision for me but Since problem child can with a better closer than byron i'ma have to give it to em... the rest was pretty much even... close yall
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03-11-09, 01:44 PM | #17 | |||||||
I made it and il end it
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03-12-09, 06:25 AM | #18 | |||||||
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IP: 24A5 7376
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03-12-09, 07:35 PM | #19 | |||||||
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03-17-09, 01:52 PM | #20 | |||||||
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IP: D64C 232F
c'mon vote!!___________________________________+++
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03-17-09, 10:39 PM | #21 | |||||||
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03-18-09, 12:39 AM | #22 | ||||||||
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Voted For: Da Problem Child
two different styles but my vote goes to da problem child flow was better brydon had some fire lines but all in all dpc u win
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03-18-09, 01:52 AM | #23 | ||||||
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IP: A0BC FE33
Voted For: Da Problem Child
See the problem is your style is bringing flip,jump and skip but u aint got this won, coz you may just be a child but no-one round here has heard of BATTLE-NASTICS SON. nah... Bitch you got things twisted, i look at your ryhme scheme but musta missed it, Coz yeah i see it and dissed it but still if it was a building it would be listed. eeeh i saw the reference but felt like u could of worded this wa better.. This battle iv pissed it, the trophy iv already kissed it, u admit u have problems but u loved it so much u tried to fist it. nasty and weak... Yes your lame n, i dont wonna be the 1 your blame'n but its wack your demonstrating,your read makes me feel its raining. weak... Where the fuck u at kid? coz really i dont know.... coz i need to lines of snow to try follow your flow. nah weak... 4/10 weak verse... vs His trash can rhymes dont even deserve a desent punchline itz amazing how you can be on so many peoples dicks at one-time flow no punch and wasnt even a good diss... and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man nasty and have no relevence to this battle... its so indifficult to stop this clown-from-breathing im suprise he's found time to challenge me, the porn sites must be down-this-evening eeeh but decent at best.. you rhymes'-desieving i'd father this sucker but from that time-consieving, how did you escape from the rubber weak and played... its only fair to come hard as wood, because he couldn't scrape-of blisters so i'll slay him like a jew, and im Adolf-Hitler best line in this battle yet still a played concept... 6/10 vote: problem
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03-18-09, 07:18 AM | #24 | ||||||
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Voted For: Da Problem Child
and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man you rhymes'-desieving i'd father this sucker but from that time-consieving, how did you escape from the rubber vs. nother i cant explain it any more,.... DPC just had the better verse
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