Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
120 Minutes To Key

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-02-04 at 10:51 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 08:55 PM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 09:02 PM.

I've got elevated standards mixed with an inclined rhymin' attack//
Battle in SUB ZERO temperatures to Yank the SPINE OUT YA BACK//
Have you lying out flat......Real emcees, are part of a dying breed.....
what you really need-to-do//
is stop gettin' your nuts pumped up when you're on weed and brew//
You're transparent, I can see through you....I'm known for wreckin//
Careers on the net...see me clear as a threat...catch shells from your own weapon//
Severely I'll wet.....your sweat suit, let loose, holes appear in your flesh//
A Fetish to fukk you up....chunk,a spear in your chest to leave you a mess//
I've been pushed to the edge, took a sledge,hammer to the roof of your head//
then split in three.....with the sharp wedge.......blade of an axe///
You write and recite,bullshit for free, while I get paid to spit facts//
I'm raping these tracks....feel like the BFI man, Taking out trash//
Fresh flavored, so I'm making it last....Chinese Issue A.K. sprayin' em fast//
No hesitation or delayin' on my part, just start, squeezing//
My A.K.'s got V.A. bleeding....you're lungs are opened so air's leaking//
Leading to having difficulty breathing.....seeing you gasping and weezing//
I ain't gonna just leave 'em.......Nobody knows where V.A. went//
Placement....body parts scattered about under the pavement//
Teeth and head elsewhere in a furnace getting cremated//
You can get away with murder....long as it's pre-meditated//

somthing quick

Dont matter

wanted to get it over and done with

hopfully you dont toake 3 hours for your verse when i dropped a keyd verse in 10 minutes

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uppin for votes. leave links...i need credits. so i will return the favor.

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

damn in my opinion verbal killed it ... Ice Pick deff. had more lines but its not always quan. over qual. well sure as hell not in this case ... i saw some decent punches on Ice's side...some lines were a lil stretched but all in all it flowed ok ... verbal deff over powered him in the personal field which is what i think one it that and the flow and i was mos def diggin that closer .... hahahaha ... this was a nice battle

stay up...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139297

^^^^^ link ... appreciate it

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

my vote goes to this guy because he had a better flow going with his,...and his vocab was serious too....
return da favor~~~~http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138354

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Voted For: Ice Pick

nice battle fellas,

verbale abuse
u was a decent flow, a few good disses and decent punches that was fairly effective plus u'r creativeness was slightly above average...
7.5

ice pick
u had the better flow with more effective hit that was better to me, u'r creativeness was above average and every line was slick, plus u'r diss was decent as-well not a bad verse..

8.0 outta 10

flow: ice
punches: ice by far
creative: ice

vote ice:

nice drop fellas

Thanks for the real votes

I hate when people who want to battle me vote against me

Fuckin pussy ass mother fuckers

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dont get upset ... your not going to win every battle ...

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Flow: Verbal Abuse
Structure: Verbal Abuse
Punches: TIE
Personals: TIE
Metas: Verbal Abuse
Multiez: Verbal Abuse
Creativity: Verbal Abuse
Enjoyment: Verbal Abuse

VOTE: Verbal Abuse

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