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Old 08-05-04, 03:45 PM   #1
Lekchur
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Lekchur vs GEE
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Check in by: 08-05-04 at 04:15 PM

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Old 08-05-04, 03:47 PM   #2
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Lekchur has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 03:47 PM.
 
Old 08-05-04, 03:50 PM   #3
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GEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 03:50 PM.
 
Old 08-05-04, 04:12 PM   #4
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Look at his sig, he sounds "cocky" like hes the best guy in sports,
but he spits "nervously" against me like wen criminals testify in courts.
I'm the sheriff of "Pensylvania", your rhymes are crimes, and I'm labelin capers*,
so with mah "pistol" I cause "mania", and put more holes in you, than when I'm staplin papers.
I never "waste rhymes", like construction workers, I never "save-a-bar",
after I "knock him out", I'll leave this bitch confused, like his "av-a-tar".
Nobody understands your lines, you need more "substance", originality, you lack the lyrical "fat",
cuz your rhymes "go over people's heads" like throwback hats.
I "run over" schmucks, like "trucks", and I "drive all day" fa fun.
"Lekchur" thinks shes gonna win, but "her-luck"** is done.

*Crimes
**Swich the letters up in his name.

-Look at his info and avatar on the side and shit, youll get it.
 
Old 08-05-04, 04:13 PM   #5
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BRUISIN THIS MAN, Like 'Throwin In Poker Cards' I'm 'REMOVIN YA HANDS'
Yea I'm All About My Money, But Still I'll 'Drop G' Like 'LOSIN A GRAND'!!
Shit DUDE CAN YOU STAND? I Guess Not When I'm SNATCHIN YA LEGS
It's Like I 'Flipped And Broke Ya Name' Bitch Cuz Im 'CRACKIN A EGG'!!
Arms SNAPPIN LIKE PEGS, Look At My Wins Your The NEXT TO GET KILLED
YES THIS IS REAL, Cuz You Know Lek Gon 'Move E' Like 'EXTACY PILLS'!!
Slice Ya NECK AND YA GRILL! You Beat Me? Now That's SILLY I SAY
'Fucka GEE' Man!! This Niggas 'Name' Should 'REALLY BE GAY(GEe)'!!
The MILLY WILL SPRAY, Injectin Holes In Ya To SMACK YOU INTO PLACE
I Know Your A Ho! So I'll Have 'G In Tears' Like The TATTOO ON THEY FACE!!

**Line 4, His Name Is GEE Flip It eEG/EGG**
**Line 6, geE/Extacy**
**Line 10, Once A Gangsta Kills Someone They Get A Tear Drop By They Temple**
 
Old 08-05-04, 04:16 PM   #6
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Good shit Lekchur, Good battle here.

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Old 08-05-04, 04:22 PM   #7
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No Doubt Gee You Too..Aye Can You Vote On This Battle For Me Fam??
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139514

Thanks...Uppin
 
Old 08-05-04, 04:31 PM   #8
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Voted For: Lekchur

dayum i give this too lekchur

lekchur had the better flow......his punches hit HARD!!!.....his structure was good...good word usage...good wordplay.......decent vocab.......this was an all around sick verse...good jon lekchur

gee ur shit was aiight but basic in some points..if u worded things differently then it wuld sound harder ..like the first line was decent but if u worded it different it culd of sounded better...ur punches were alright..good wordplay..bad structure..ur flow was off at points...overall...this was an aiight verse

vote: lekchur
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Old 08-05-04, 04:37 PM   #9
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Thanks For Voting, 1-1 Or 1-0 I Guess, I Dunno, Lol, Uppin......
 
Old 08-05-04, 04:42 PM   #10
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Voted For: Lekchur

lec overall im givin this to you cause of punches along with good personals n good structure you flow was rarely off n i think you both tied in wordplay multi's n creativeness,this was a good battle..props ta both....return the vote...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139794

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Old 08-05-04, 04:51 PM   #11
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2-1 or 2-0.. Thanks A Lot For Voting...I'll Vote On All The Peeps Who Voted Here...
 
Old 08-05-04, 04:56 PM   #12
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Yea fa sho, keep tha votes comin.



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Old 08-05-04, 04:57 PM   #13
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Voted For: GEE

Iight fam. I got yall on this hit me back...

Struc - Gee
Metas - Gee
Creativity - both, tie
Personals- Lekchur
Punches - almost a tie, but Lekchur came harder wit
My vote goes to Gee, holla back, fav. for fav. in return.
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Old 08-05-04, 05:01 PM   #14
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Wow I Get The 2 Most Important Category And He Gets The Vote?? Lol. Wow. Anyway 2-1 or 2-2...
 
Old 08-05-04, 07:34 PM   #15
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