Originally Posted by Jacko

Ya over dude..in fact, you're depressing..a downer bitch
Especially since Empire realized that his skill was counterfeit
->>good opener here

Pound ya fists, ur cocky, but ur lines are the poorest..
& ya couldnt catch a buzz..surrounded by forests
->>no...

Get flossed ya geek..u weak & Jackos pardons...
But it'll be real nice if Empire leaves, like fed Gardens!
->>what does the first line mean? punch in second line didnt connect

hit with a flurry…. from behind, watch your head crack
twist you’re frail little body around, so you can talk back
->>ehh its a decent punch

Forever branded… you can’t change the past, stop tryin
I mean really… you switched to dial up just to keep lyin
->>I dont understand this...did you have beef in the past or what? shouldve been explained better

->>ehh its a decent verse...youve got some skill i see from the first bar but the rest was mediocre

Originally Posted by Empire

Perfect example of mismatched compeatition
Cuz he up aganist a M.C whos lingunstically gifted
->>ehh decent opener

And he cant win if Jesus gave him Christiian assisitanece
Understand a vote here is extremly simplistic
->>good good

Satistically a win is non-exisitent you only a groupie
Ya shit aight but need work you like old hooptys
->>weak bar

''JACK'' gonna have ''O''s for the rest of his wins
Cuz the weakest unelevated lyricists still better then him
->>alright punch

Artists cant seem to fathom dont challenge superiors
like you spitting novacaine its over lame...nobody is feeling ya
->>played but decent

->>nothing too amazing here but it was enough to take him out. your bars all made sense and you had a good punch or two.