Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 is ko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 03:25 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MoTiF has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 02:41 AM.

Word processor has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 02:46 AM.

alright-
goin into this battle, two things is prewritten
your versre and death,test in my skillz you get killed like a curious kitten*
this battle bout ta give you sum divine MOTIFvation
to help you cope wit this loss everyones anticipatin'
you stupid bitch, im a head of you like fuckin pre-fix
bitch, if you amputated limbs you couldn't DE-FEET this**
i aint no smooth lyricist i muderer you non-discretely
sever ya head but like ya punches wont finish tha job completely
your a fucking nothing to me, be on the health facts
on bottles of aquafina***
u fuckin geomtry pop-Quiz, battlein' you is talkin' "SQUARE BIZ"
like Teena****
Motif gets clapped and niggaz call him tha mummy
but Motif will never learn, so ima "let him burn" and tuck his tummy
(style switch) four line ryhmez
and mabe then voters will show him alittle sympathy
i own you TOBY, get that through you head or have a ephiphany
don't ever fuckin Question me, you have no authority
like slaves you OWNED in this battle , you prolly gone runaway from me*****
~his last hours (closer)~
like that 15yr old boy from flrodia you getting an unjust sentence
you've just been BURNT, now please leave tha board room you fuckin' APPERNTICE...



explanations-
* cley-shay curiousity killed tha cat
** double meaning think about it
*** aquafina has O% of every thing on tha health fact things
**** teena marie had a song called square biz, tha radio was playing old school music wen i wrote dis
*****lika runaway slave, a little multi
The closer-
in florida this 15yr old nigga got life in prison for accidently killing his 8 yr. old neighbor when wrestling wit her
and
instead of saying your fired i said your burnt, another double meaning

Just a Small child Knock him out if i Coughed..
....You Micro Bitch evan to Bill Gates ur Soft..
Drop bars and smash u like a fat kid out Bp..
Talk big for a recess kid u cant Beat-Me..
Understand u cant Stand from a 1 Man Band..
ur Body trembles if my Keys are near my Hand..
Dont come back for a fight u cant win..
Ur chance is 0 to none Like LK gettin with Men..

I tried sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hard

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Voted For: Word processor

ima have to give this one to u homeboy...some of ya punches just stood out to me...like the defeet this one..i liked that...opener was ass becuz it was hella stretched..i wasnt really feelin ya closer either...

Motif...it seemed like u really didnt put forth a effort on this...opener i wasnt feelin dat...punches werent really hittin...i wasnt really feelin ya closer either...so i guess u should try more next time...

i took the time out to vote return the favor on my battle in frontlines agsint Empire...links mess up when i copy them so i didnt use one thank u

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[.Diabolic:.]

haha motif ima KO your bitch-ass, add you to my sigg

you got yo ass sooooooo whooped trying hard or not

Voted For: Word processor

Word processor -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

MoTiF -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

Just vote for him jeez i didnt evan try i forgot bout this

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Voted For: MoTiF

Ok, Motif came with better punches and better structure. Word, your lines were stretched at times, and some of your lines didn't make any sense at all. But no hate, you started off pretty good, just your verse fell apart after a lil' bit. And on your finisher "you just got BURNT, so leave the boardroom you fuckin' apprentice" would've worked better had you said FIRED instead of BURNT, as that's what Donald Trump really says. But hey, maybe you saw an episode of the Apprentice that I didn't, I don't know. Your verse just could've took a little more effort...
Vote - Motif

Return the favor at the link in my sig, honest votes only...

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you took my KO, dam you.lol
uppin

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