Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-21-04 at 04:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. asking for votes in the Lounge

AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 07:44 PM.

You Don’t Want it … So Don’t Battle Unless You Into Getting Yo Skull Cracked
I Grip Pieces,So When Its Inside You And I Squeeze It,You’ll Really Get Soul Clapped
I Spit Nice hits Those who Test Me Be On The Ground Beggin For Life’s Wish
So Who You Tronna Fight Wit? Now RV Can Witness Ice Pick Get Sliced Quick
It’s too easy … Youre a vet ? Then You’re About To Get Your License Revoked
You’re Done ,So The Next Time They’ll See IP Is To The Right Of Your Posts
Yeh Im a bad dude…My Spits is Dirty , So God Himself Couldn’t Scare Me Clean
We All Know You’re A Joke … So Imma Officially Serve Ice Like Dairy Queen
You Cant Stand A Chance Wit Me. So Watch My Textuals Grind Ya Spine
Yeh This Kid Hates But He Can Recite All My Battles Line for Line
And Im Sick Of Battlin All These Teens Pricks … Just Another Martial Mathers
Your Record Proves Nothin Faggot … We All Know You’re A Partial Rapper
We Know You Were Blessed Wit Whackness, I Rhyme With My presence An Spot Flashes
It’s Obvious You’re Fake,The Only Time U Eat Kids Is When Usin Condoms As Shot Glasses


Easy Kid….

haha.pretty nice lookin font.i didnt mean to do that ... so sorry for that if peeps cant read it.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 01:50 PM.

Auto's the type of scrub I recognize in clubs but refuse 2 talk to
I'm a glass door, got you lookin foolish thinkin' you can walk through
I'll stomp you, into smitherines, leave you flatter than Asian bitches
chest, back, or ya' neck cracked, it doesn't matter, my aim is vicious
your brain is witless, all you seem to conjure up is aimless disses
I'm comin' at you with everything & the kitchen sink... you came with dishes
so 'clean up your act' bitch and practice, before you try more than rhymed text
and while you're doin that, I'll be entertainin' ya girl with some light sex
she gives me 'mic checks', so I never need to warm up for my advanced sets
it's crazy, she pays me... oh yeah, remind her to send me my past due checks
but enough about her, Auto, lets get back to you and me
it's lunacy, thinkin that in deulin' me, you would be, abusin' me
my flow carries through every bar in the verse, yours last for 2 or 3
I'm a true emcee, somethin that you're still wishin that you could be
usually, I wouldn't waste my time with rhymes dissin' a useless punk
L.I should have thought about this befor i get his biggest bitch knocked up
See auto i impregnate weak ass mother fuckers like you with real skill son
I fathered your style , im the real definiton ill while you just a wack one
Think about what you said you have ill speech patterns when ryming
Thats because you swallow loads and take it in the ass while dick ryding
Its true webster wants nothing to do with ya crew or new words with no meaning or conception
Next time decline ya mission with ya •|20/20|• vision and go another direction
so blind cant you see your faulty with imperfections
We can squabble, ..I`ll beat you until your in a broken grovel,
As for boxing.. You can`t see me in the ring, Like Tolkien`s novel,
Your like the rest so just take the beating, ..I`m clownin this mark,
Any 'glimer of hope' you`ll have will get 'shot down in the dark',
I`m groundin ur heart, I don`t just beat.. I eat my opponents,
We can shoot it out too, But i got bullets in the heat of the moment,
I speak it and own it, This styles mine.. & it`ll get the best of u,
When you lose, It won`t be that big of a deal, ..We expect you to,
Heres the thing, When i read ya shit, I wanna leave the page tore,
If you can`t afford to lose, ..How the hell are you gonna wage war?
I`m battlin a crack-headed E-tard.. Theres no way to confuse it believe me,
You Said you like my style and im funny as fuck, and you got respect for me
So this killing is nothing to me, like ya avy this aint a game like sonic on genisis dude
I guess im predicting the win , like it was automatik , like when you lose and ya crew removes you 2

wtf. nigga u told me 12-14 lines. i could of wrote a novel too ...

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Ice
u had some decent punches nuthin that stuck out 2 me
ya personals werent really there
had some multis and metas
but once again u lose do 2 soft punches and wack structure
u gotta fix those if u plan on winning

Auto
ya punches were there but they didnt hit that hard
some of them were simple and played
coulda used a little elevation here it was kinda simple
ya structure was on point for most part but still stretched
in some spots
u get this win due 2 overall better punches

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Trooper
plenty of personals, read it again, check his sig and his profyle and shit.....

Also

it says 6 to unlimited lines........


also i work and there for i dont give a fuck how much shit i drop for my verse.....

It was you who wanted to battle me

not the other way around....

so, if you want i will edit this down to 12 to 14 lines or what ever......

Your Choice

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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

i got to vote automatik in diz 1....he had da better flow he had better punches..i felt his more..and his punches were creative and he had nice vocab...ice had okay punches da flow was a lil off his voacb and creativity was kind of basic tho..so my vote goes to auto...
return da favor in dis battle
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please.....

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And Im Sick Of Battlin All These Teens Pricks … Just Another Martial Mathers
Your Record Proves Nothin Faggot … We All Know You’re A Partial Rapper

dude im 24 years old you retard, not a fucking teen


You Don’t Want it … So Don’t Battle Unless You Into Getting Yo Skull Cracked
I Grip Pieces,So When Its Inside You And I Squeeze It,You’ll Really Get Soul Clapped
I Spit Nice hits Those who Test Me Be On The Ground Beggin For Life’s Wish
So Who You Tronna Fight Wit? Now RV Can Witness Ice Pick Get Sliced Quick
It’s too easy … Youre a vet ? Then You’re About To Get Your License Revoked
You’re Done ,So The Next Time They’ll See IP Is To The Right Of Your Posts
Yeh Im a bad dude…My Spits is Dirty , So God Himself Couldn’t Scare Me Clean
We All Know You’re A Joke … So Imma Officially Serve Ice Like Dairy Queen
You Cant Stand A Chance Wit Me. So Watch My Textuals Grind Ya Spine
Yeh This Kid Hates But He Can Recite All My Battles Line for Line
And Im Sick Of Battlin All These Teens Pricks … Just Another Martial Mathers
Your Record Proves Nothin Faggot … We All Know You’re A Partial Rapper
We Know You Were Blessed Wit Whackness, I Rhyme With My presence An Spot Flashes
It’s Obvious You’re Fake,The Only Time U Eat Kids Is When Usin Condoms As Shot Glasses


that sis what your verse should look like

i hate when people shrink the font to make it look like its tite and not stretched

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holy shit... that so many lines man.................
and trop came with only 16

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

yo ice pick you gonna battle me next?, jsut chickin polls

ok.you're right,i forgot to add the 12-14 lines in the rules but you said 12-14 so i went by that ... but you can keep your novel,i dont care.

and it dosent matter if my verse LOOKS stretched . It's not about how it looks,if it sounds stretched then thats when they say "it was stretched"

i dont make my font small to make it not look stretched,lmao!

this battle will take forever to end if ya'll dont vote right,so lets get to it.
good luck Mr.Pick ...