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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

don't vote because somebody's
name sig or avytar is better..nor
voting because the person's online..

Vote for the winner please!!that is all

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-08-04 at 01:42 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

ambient has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 03:43 PM.

.Indeph. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 04:17 PM.

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Voted For: ambient

Ambient.... friend.. pal..please die a slow death..
how could u swallow a win..rockin a girl with no neck?
don't check..AFTER you write..do you need a lesson?
I'm confused..is that your bank account..or your record
your verse is predicted..I think with every line I am threatened...
your verse's cause despression,like a salvation army presents
punches from my profile..you did no more then planning
I think you could of got a mic..but paid more for tanning
here's your specs..unless this pest..does not see me well
everyone will agree...how many people thought he was female
but I think he failed..tryin to get votes the same way as DML..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES FAM GOOD FLOW....PERSONALS AND PUNCHES CONNECTED....DIDNT SENSE ANY WORDPLAYS (I THINK) I SENSE META'Z

GOOD DROP THOUGH FAM...I COULD'VE FELT U COULD CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES FAM... PERSONALS WERE GOOD BUT DA PUNCHES I THOUGHT YOU'VE COULD COME HARDER~!



amb is one to stay on top.. & leave deph coughin' dust
deph was on top.. of parralel, & they both fuck 'en' suck
one person can speak for many.. here's RV droppin truth
take away ur d/r wins.. as sayin's go, u got nothin but lose
thing is we're both 14.. so i guess that age isn't everything
chuz i drop fresh lines.. while deph drops played.. well, anythin'
i'll drop from the top... in dep't'h & prove that height hurts
deph thought about leaving rv.. but he was like "life's first"
spark ya chin & smack ya n do wat ya mum shoulda.. at birth
fortunate for u, ppl gotta vote b4 i k.o u.. well, we gotta laugh first
u'll discover yer verse 'in pieces'.. it's religion that ur put to ur 'rest'
wen u log on rv, if ur K.O aint served yet, u'll be checkin in for deph
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ CHEA FAM THIS WAS GOOD.... NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES THE 1ST BAR ABOUT PARREL AND INDEPH GOT ME ROLLING FAM LOL........WERD I'D SENSE WORDPLAYS....




OVERALL= THIS WAS AN OK BATTLE I THOUGHT BOTH INDEPH AND AMBIENT COULD'VE COME HARDER WITH THEM PUNCHES......BUT ANYWAY

INDEPH TOOK FLOW
OK WITH THEM PUNCHES
GOOD WITH THEM PERSONALS
AND META'Z WAS GOOD


AMBIENT

GOOD AT PUNCHES
GOOD AT PERSONALS
GOOD AT WORDPLAYS


MY VOTE I HAVE TO SAY..........AMBIENT HIS PUNCHES JUST CAME ALOT HARDER


LISTEN


INDEPH- YOU HAD SOME STRONG LINES... OF PERSONALS AND META'Z... BUT THE PUNCHES I'VE FELT U COULD'VE COME HARD THAN THAT...GOOD VERSE THOUGH BUT DA PUNCHES WERE KINDA WEAK...


V-AMBIENT FOR HARDER PUNCHES

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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-

SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

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Voted For: .Indeph.

Indeph... your vreese was solid.... nice flow nice punches and your personals was good.... your streucture was okay but i dont understand why you center your verses like that only time i have seen someone do that is in topical and poetry but that your thing...

your two best bars was

Ambient.... friend.. pal..please die a slow death..
how could u swallow a win..rockin a girl with no neck?
everyone will agree...how many people thought he was female
but I think he failed..tryin to get votes the same way as DML..

Only adivice i could give to you is to keep your shit simple but complex and make your shit rhyme more... throw some multis and more metas in there

Ambient... your verse was good aswell but i really just wasnt feeling your personal... that link was pretty lame and your opener was gay as fuck and played... sex punches went out a long time ago.... your closer was okay but not really that good and to me your opener and closer combined its 45% of my shit

v/indeph

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