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Old 12-23-04, 12:31 PM   #1
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untouchablekilla vs ~Logic~

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6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-26-04 at 12:31 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. swaying
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172323

Edit 1/22: Reversed.. battle closed on 1/15 at 10pm while above thread was posted on 1/16



This Battle Is Now Closed

 
Old 12-23-04, 12:31 PM   #2
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~Logic~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 12:31 PM.
 
Old 12-23-04, 12:32 PM   #3
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untouchablekilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 12:32 PM.
 
Old 12-23-04, 01:46 PM   #4
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*Fuck head*,I'd rather battle*cordless* otha then this stupid bitch//
*More or less* He's like tha Booty *thread* an asshole thas fullov shit//
I spit *XXX to see* if my expilcit fall will make u fall like *Niagra*
He's seeing colors, tha only tyme u spit hard is if dicks fullov *VIagra*//
He be on tha*cock* around tha *Clock* but scrams when he sees me on tha *Block*//
Untouchable plese nigga tha only tyme you Ryde Ruff is when you see D_ on tha *block*//(d meaning dick)
U throwing punches kid and they all being intercepted//
Cuz u like System just a guest on this site that has'nt been Accepted//
 
Old 12-23-04, 01:47 PM   #5
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Logic~
*Fuck head*,I'd rather battle*cordless* otha then this stupid bitch//
*More or less* He's like tha Booty *thread* an asshole thas fullov shit//
I spit *XXX to see* if my expilcit fall will make u flow like *Niagra*
He's seeing colorsfrom tha X tha only tyme u spit hard is if dicks fullov *VIagra*//
He be on tha*cock* around tha *Clock* but scrams when he sees me on tha *Block*//
Untouchable plese nigga tha only tyme you Ryde Ruff is when you see D_ on tha *block*//(d meaning dick)
U throwing punches kid and they all being intercepted//
Cuz u like System just a guest on this site that has'nt been Accepted//





damn my fault to many typos


hope i don't have to explain tha punches ~!~
 
Old 12-24-04, 12:11 AM   #6
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Lyrical God Like Jesus Started Rappin I'll Leave You Spiritually Lifted/
You Could Get Ryhmes For Christmas And Still Wouldnt Be Lyrically Gifted/
Fuck Queer Eye For The Straight Guy get a Blindfold for this Gay bitch/
Cause Skillwise your lyrics are Nothing To See like a girl with Size A Tits/
Now this nikka is a dork forget the guns that he claims to hold/
Cuz the only thing he touchin are nine's..ten's..and eleven year olds/
Only time youd ever be on top of me is if u was standin on da globe/
I can go over the bar limit and u still wouldnt win if u ran ta strobe/


merry xmas bitch! =D
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Old 12-24-04, 11:11 AM   #7
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upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 12-24-04, 02:01 PM   #8
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Voted For: ~Logic~

this wasnt even close logic actully had better pucnhes smother flow and an alla round more enjoyable read word

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
 
Old 12-24-04, 06:06 PM   #9
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uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn n
 
Old 12-24-04, 08:54 PM   #10
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Old 12-24-04, 11:31 PM   #11
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upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 12-25-04, 01:49 AM   #12
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Old 12-25-04, 05:36 AM   #13
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This was feedback posted for untouchablekilla

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HaHa Damn Both Verses Wass Weak Lmao..........
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Old 12-25-04, 10:30 AM   #14
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upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnn
 
Old 12-25-04, 01:13 PM   #15
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Cool

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Quote:
Originally Posted by hang-man
Voted For: ~Logic~

this wasnt even close logic actully had better pucnhes smother flow and an alla round more enjoyable read word

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.


maybe ya aint get it see i could of broke this down like this:


Lyrical God Like Jesus Started Rappin I'll Leave You Spiritually Lifted/
You Could Get Ryhmes For Christmas And Still Wouldnt Be Lyrically Gifted/
that 2ed line been played every single year WEAK

Fuck Queer Eye For The Straight Guy get a Blindfold for this Gay bitch/
Cause Skillwise your lyrics are Nothing To See like a girl with Size A Tits/
thats decent

Now this nikka is a dork forget the guns that he claims to hold/
Cuz the only thing he touchin are nine's..ten's..and eleven year olds/
thats aight R.KELLY ha, decent diss

Only time youd ever be on top of me is if u was standin on da globe/
I can go over the bar limit and u still wouldnt win if u ran ta strobe/
i wasnt really feeling this, but its ok i guess should of had a better ending

*Fuck head*,I'd rather battle*cordless* otha then this stupid bitch//
*More or less* He's like tha Booty *thread* an asshole thas fullov shit//
not bad... but i must ask who is cordless? cordless

I spit *XXX to see* if my expilcit fall will make u fall like *Niagra*
He's seeing colors, tha only tyme u spit hard is if dicks fullov *VIagra*//
ok but kinda played and need it a flip

He be on tha*cock* around tha *Clock* but scrams when he sees me on tha *Block*//
Untouchable plese nigga tha only tyme you Ryde Ruff is when you see D_ on tha *block*//(d meaning dick)
ok

U throwing punches kid and they all being intercepted//
Cuz u like System just a guest on this site that has'nt been Accepted//
ha best line in this battle smoth and hit preety good and good ending

^^ thats why i picked logic as the winner so if u may PM strobe back and ask him to COUNT MY VOTE NOW I would be honerd
 
 


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