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George K.Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 07:40 AM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 08:40 AM.

pardon da wait dunny...........

i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's..
u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"*
stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells
u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12".....
look at 1 of george post if u wanna c da sloppyest fukk ryhme
fukk ya "crew" fag 2 mags a leave ya "body.above ya.mind"...
ima slump dis chump...he's gay he like men da touch his butt
a "straw" n "sex" describes ya skillz cuzz you "fuckin-suck".....
your goin da b my 1st example ima b deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like "air" when it drop cuzz it a "neva be touched"


*my first bar...he does poetry n if any of ya'll seen oz on hbo they had a dude name poet u'll get it*

n his crew is mind above body...so u'll get da otha punch

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^^he's scared.lol

Fuckin joke'll get smoked, and for his skill i'm still searchin'
cus if J had a dime for every time he came ill - he'd be a virgin
weak he's the worst in Queens, kid's equipped with piss poor spits
the only time i'd peep Marv's cuts - is if they're were on his wrists
bitch is geek reaks of ass, doubt he knows how to win
n if his verse looks like crap - its' cus i scared the shit out of em'
sit down you simp, how can you fend, for yourself you smell of herb
Marv'll make Rv proud when he drops...off the face of the earth
a waste of my words the gay's merked, wack that he raps is strange
so i gave Mj a penny for his thoughts - and still got back change



please detailed votes only, no bs

i dropped that crew earlier
no bs either it was before the call out

Voted For: George K.Stanza

Aiight look. George took this battle because of better punches that were simple but more effective. Marv, ya shit def wasnt bad, but damn that "" symbol type crap is played man..

Some decent multies in ya verse. But at times the punches fell off in my opinion.

v/ George K.Stanza..............

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Voted For: George K.Stanza

dam nigga he had harder punches more personals better flow and most of all his opener and closure was killer. so this is my vote but hey keep elevating.

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Fuckin joke'll get smoked, and for his skill i'm still searchin'
cus if J had a dime for every time he came ill - he'd be a virgin
decent not bad

weak he's the worst in Queens, kid's equipped with piss poor spits
the only time i'd peep Marv's cuts - is if they're were on his wrists
ok

bitch is geek reaks of ass, doubt he knows how to win
n if his verse looks like crap - its' cus i scared the shit out of em'
decent

sit down you simp, how can you fend, for yourself you smell of herb
Marv'll make Rv proud when he drops...off the face of the earth
ha preety good made me laugh really

a waste of my words the gay's merked, wack that he raps is strange
so i gave Mj a penny for his thoughts - and still got back change
could of been a better ending not a strong finish but it was ok a few good bars a few decent 7.0


i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's..
u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"*
decent

stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells
u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12".....
ha im feeling that good word-play N all soild

look at 1 of george post if u wanna c da sloppyest fukk ryhme
fukk ya "crew" fag 2 mags a leave ya "body.above ya.mind"...
good play off hes crew name which make is a personal

ima slump dis chump...he's gay he like men da touch his butt
a "straw" n "sex" describes ya skillz cuzz you "fuckin-suck".....
ha good one

your goin da b my 1st example ima b deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like "air" when it drop cuzz it a "neva be touched"
decent meta and a better ending
u had a couple of more better bars plus u had a personal and a decent meta and diss thats why i think u edge it out here nice battle ya'll it was a good read

up...that mab punch was wack
played as fuck.....

if you don't understand dont vote.................

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Marvjay.............
i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's..
u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"*
ok opener....1st line wasnt great...2nd line hit pretty hard...made me laugh

stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells
u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12".....
good wordplay.....hit decent.....good bar

look at 1 of george post if u wanna c da sloppyest fukk ryhme
fukk ya "crew" fag 2 mags a leave ya "body.above ya.mind"...
not really feelin it....coulda been better...wasnt too great

ima slump dis chump...he's gay he like men da touch his butt
a "straw" n "sex" describes ya skillz cuzz you "fuckin-suck".....
good meta n wordplay.....1st line is played...but 2nd line hit hard

your goin da b my 1st example ima b deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like "air" when it drop cuzz it a "neva be touched"
it was ok....should have came with a better closer though...2nd worst bar of your verse

George..........
Fuckin joke'll get smoked, and for his skill i'm still searchin'
cus if J had a dime for every time he came ill - he'd be a virgin
decent opener....hit decent....not real hard though

weak he's the worst in Queens, kid's equipped with piss poor spits
the only time i'd peep Marv's cuts - is if they're were on his wrists
ok.........just a decent punch....nothin spectacular

bitch is geek reaks of ass, doubt he knows how to win
n if his verse looks like crap - its' cus i scared the shit out of em'
1st line not good.....2nd line better but you shoulda made it a lil more complex and it would have hit harder than it did

sit down you simp, how can you fend, for yourself you smell of herb
Marv'll make Rv proud when he drops...off the face of the earth
hit decent.....ok bar

a waste of my words the gay's merked, wack that he raps is strange
so i gave Mj a penny for his thoughts - and still got back change
played....very very played....sorry but it is....just not too great of a closer



so i voted for marv because...........i thought overall his punches hit harder than stanzas.....both had some nice multis but marv used more....marv killed george witht he wordplay and metas........marvs verse was just better

but....one thing you need to work on marv....is start spelling out your words....its annoying tryin to read somebodys verse when your using the words .....ya...cuzz...fukkz....neva...dem......well you get the picture....but just start spelling out your words the way they need to be spelled....it was the only part i hated about your verse...no hate...just stating facts....good battle both of you

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Voted For: George K.Stanza

i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's..
u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"*
weak concept and punch
stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells
u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12".....
played concept..weak
look at 1 of george post if u wanna c da sloppyest fukk ryhme
fukk ya "crew" fag 2 mags a leave ya "body.above ya.mind"...
ok..but this shotting gangsta shit isnt good
ima slump dis chump...he's gay he like men da touch his butt
a "straw" n "sex" describes ya skillz cuzz you "fuckin-suck".....
gay punches are playted
your goin da b my 1st example ima b deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like "air" when it drop cuzz it a "neva be touched"
We touch air all the time...weak concept and punch




Fuckin joke'll get smoked, and for his skill i'm still searchin'
cus if J had a dime for every time he came ill - he'd be a virgin
lol, sex lines are played, but good flip
weak he's the worst in Queens, kid's equipped with piss poor spits
the only time i'd peep Marv's cuts - is if they're were on his wrists
meh..decent...weak punch
bitch is geek reaks of ass, doubt he knows how to win
n if his verse looks like crap - its' cus i scared the shit out of em'
played, weak punch
sit down you simp, how can you fend, for yourself you smell of herb
Marv'll make Rv proud when he drops...off the face of the earth
Lol
a waste of my words the gay's merked, wack that he raps is strange
so i gave Mj a penny for his thoughts - and still got back change
ok..played concept..ok punch


Overall George merked for a verse with better concepts and harder hitting punches and more consistency....Marv..get rid of the ""and ... and shit like that, it makes your verse look that more herbish

Vote=George

uppin 4 more votes dis shit been up 2 long

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^^he's scared.lol