Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 ko
4-0 ko


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-25-05 at 06:49 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO since Spoken Word voted after Stanza reached 3 votes

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 06:20 PM.

Keyweezy has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 06:21 PM.

Keyweezy has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 06:39 PM.

Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing!

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If you don't get anything. Then please don't vote. Again if you don't understand wordplay/punches DO NOT VOTE.

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Voted For: Stanza

real nice battle

keyweezy-you would have had to victory if it wasn't for your first bar...that shit was garbage...but the rest of your verse was nice..punches thrown and landed...didn't see any personals but that is aight



STANZA- the reason why you won the battle is because to u were most consisten in this...all punches thrown and landed...i didn't really like your flow though...but really that isn't all that important in text...but nice verse all around

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Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!

Thanx for the vote Man .....................im up 1-0

Nice drop KeyWeezy

And do You Have a crew?>

Good verse yo. & nah I don't fuck with crews. No point to me. Upping.

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Voted For: Keyweezy

nice battle mayne...

good use of vocab wit a good opening and closure...ur punches were a bit weak and u need to elevate.......

the structure was good and all but the use of words was weak and so was the use of ur rhyming skills.......
i dont know what to say about your verbal usage but nice battle dawwg...




overall vote: Keyweezy

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Bizarre

The Element

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Eh. I'll get that vote removed. Should of raised the posts to vote. Upping.

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Voted For: Stanza

Yo
When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
ok nice line 4/10 but not as good for a opener
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
.....lol....nice one man 8/10
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
ohhh nice closer 6/10

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Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
.....not that good
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
...hold up not a good personal there who said RV dont want him?
4/10
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing!
ok nice closer 8/10

Both did an aight vese but stanza's was way better at the punches cuz he had delivery to them and had a better flow to it key weezy u need to work on that iahgt man really....cuz u had the concepts but werent hittin hard cuz of the delivery but good battle.....jus keep it up yall but my v/ goes to Stanza....for better punches
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PLZ RTF WITH A HONEST VOTE IN ONE OF MY BATTLES

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Yeah Lets Get The Slik Flo vote removed lol

still uppin

Ok, that was NOT a personal. Otherwise, I'd explain. & wtf at delivery? That doesn't really have to do w/ anything. God, some kids are so stupid.

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