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Old 09-09-04, 10:56 PM   #16
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uppin still
c'mooooon lets get this thing closed grrrrrrreat
 
Old 09-10-04, 12:13 AM   #17
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nice drop^...
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Old 09-10-04, 12:14 AM   #18
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ok no good vocab or punches disses were corny but turban wins in structure and flow the only things left to rate and gets my vote

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Old 09-10-04, 06:11 PM   #19
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you took it wit ease , u been workn on ya rhym'n 2
 
Old 09-10-04, 06:13 PM   #20
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hahaha pac you gonna lose this one, he had u at every angle hahahaha
 
Old 09-10-04, 06:20 PM   #21
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TURBAN won diss
his structure was better he attempted
better punches just had a better verse

2pac
fix ur structure it fucked ur flow
u need 2 use wordplay vocab n metas etc.
it'll make ur verse way better beleive me

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Old 09-10-04, 07:38 PM   #22
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still uppin i would loooooove to get this one closed
 
Old 09-10-04, 07:49 PM   #23
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hahhahah both of you were not as good and not ya best verses

TURBAN: ya verse was not ya best ive seen but it was ok at least and it had bvad strucutre and diodnt flow well though ya punches were good a lil bit u shud try harder though

2pac: the only reason u didnt win is cos ya strucutre and flow ya could had had a better chance it it all messed up for you

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Old 09-10-04, 09:14 PM   #24
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TURBAN
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent & not stretched out...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

2pac
Punches were good too not as hard as TURBAN's tho...
Structure was good and not all stretched out...
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was ok...
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