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08-20-04, 02:54 AM
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IP: 71AE FF4B
Voted For: RymheReaper
yoyoyoyoyo, battle was straight, Mr. Bonks ova there was wak fo real, keep writin man.... He was talkin like he had won already, caue he wasn't sayin nuttin.... I was feelin reaper. The first bar "Ill sever ya mandable my jaws spit fire like roman candles/ yur chances of winning are so remote they turn tv channles/" fiya..... near the end u kinda fell off, but keep it up
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08-20-04, 03:22 AM
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IP: 5043 32F4
Voted For: RymheReaper
your good ur great..........................9.4/10
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08-20-04, 11:20 AM
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IP: 97C4 5CAB
uppin yo
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08-20-04, 08:31 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
Voted For: RymheReaper
Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to RymheReaper his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good His flow was heavenly and his wordplay just killed him Very good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-21-04, 12:43 PM
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IP: 97C4 5CAB
uppin yo
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08-21-04, 01:42 PM
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This was feedback posted for RymheReaper
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
All Rhymereaper I Cant Raise Da Bar// But Rhymereaper U Won Dis Fo Sho Mayne Punches Killing It Mayne
~peace~
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08-21-04, 01:43 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Yo Rhymereaper Can U Raise Da Bar On My Battle Against Upfront
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08-21-04, 04:48 PM
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IP: 97C4 5CAB
uppin yo
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08-21-04, 08:13 PM
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IP: 97C4 5CAB
uppin yo
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08-21-04, 09:00 PM
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IP: B9AB 64CC
Voted For: RymheReaper
rhyme reaper took this battle bcuz his structure was on point and he had the best punch in the whole battle>(Ill sever ya mandable my jaws spit fire like roman candles/ yur chances of winning are so remote they turn tv channles) im not gonna say to take off the lil slashes at the end cuz i think those help but erebody else on here says its "newbish" so i guess those have to go but u had better vocab n and ight attempt at multies Big bonks verse was pretty wack it was real basic n the structure was reall lackin just work on that n elevate ur vocab holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144112
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