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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

Gang... your style is very elementary... I find it very hard to beleive that YOU believe that yo shyt is so gangster.

I hear you talk shit but there aint no sizing me up,
When u battle in lil letters why u scared to speak up?,

ok opener... fix ya structure 5/10

Theres a name for band members...faggot ass huney buns,
Theres normally 4 or 5...but u all them "spices" rolled into 1,

weak... no punch... 3/10

We know u stole that style from capitol...bitch it proves u a biter,
U set urself up for this k.o...u should've named urself...I'M NOT A FIGHTER!,

huh?!!!... 1/10

Big ups to ur recording buddies dawg...no# 2 and no#3,
This guys a joke...jus do ur avy and jack ur buddies,

forced rhyme...i get the punch but it was weak... structure sucked... focus on comp...not his buddies 2/10

And ur punches could never be funny...if u were called Nitrous oxide,
Only way ur entertaining...is when u on rotten.com & we watchin u die,

weak...no punch... filler lines... 1/10

And whats wit ur obsession wit multies...u think it'll make u a more man band?
Coz the truth is...u got no love as a child...
.............momma was too ashamed to hold ur hand,

"a more man band"... nuff said about that... 0/10

One-Man-Band no-man-can flow-as-bad as-this-man,
Rhymes like jam sticky and clammed perhaps u should keep it in the can,

finally decided to try and use multi's... I'll consider that some form of a diss just for the simple fact that you said he was obsessed with multi's and you were "attempting" to show him that anyone could do them...still kinda weak, though. 4/10

overall, not really impressive at all, work on ya structure, multi's, wordplay, and vocab.

OMB...

You had multi's galore in ya verse and ya punches hit a lot harder. At times it seemed as if some of ya multi's were thrown in for effect. EX:

you talk shit, but im a famed pro, you killed a few peeps... but ive slain-mo'
your veins blow, ima punch ya wit skittles on my fist... so you can taste the rain-bow

that line seems filler to me... there were like 1 or two more that i considered to be filler but the structure was on point and flowed well. you went from personals to just talking shyt at times ... *the taste the rainbow line* ... that's cool and all but the impressive stuff is when you got personal with him and stated the facts.

v/OMB... if i had the 100 posts... so here's da feedback

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

Voted For: One-Man-Band

This battle truly surprised me... this herb talkin shit to me kinda threw me
How you gon' diss me on crew ... when yours is just you n' another newbie!?
~Good punch/personal 7/10
Sparkin the heat, park n' retreat, cuz my freestyles leave ya chalked in the street
Gangstar ain't a loser, he just got a L on his head cuz he's marked fa defeat
~Good multis followed up with a decent punch 7.5/10
shark n' release.. im reelin' the strife, all this talk bout him bein real is just lies
Be honest kid, we all know ya got more G's in ya name than you ever seen in ya life
~An okay punch followed up with a personal 7.5/10
haha... but seriously, youre a fake, go cry to mommy cos no way im finished wit ya yet
some gangsta... lost a battle so he has a bitch .. then tries to start beef on the internet!
~Another okay punch followed up by a personal
7.5/10
slice ya face, ive got a verses so hard when ya get knocked out ya lights'll break
Dice n' mace.. bitch, Ill kill you elegantly... just so cats can say ya died with grace
~Nice multis...not a great punch though 7/10
ya cant even try, ya fake.. take my hits.. ya born to die, shit leaves ya scorned fa life
ya so wack, if i didnt see this post, i woulda never thought ya rapped before this site
~haha, very nice punch 7.5/10
you talk shit, but im a famed pro, you killed a few peeps... but ive slain-mo'
your veins blow, ima punch ya wit skittles on my fist... so you can taste the rain-bow
~Nice multis, wordplay, and a good punch 8/10
ruffin ya slate, clench n' smack, quicker than that, my fist'll muffle ya face
this scuffle's a waste.. wanna see his verse? go check other rap sites....shuffle n' paste
~Not a bad punch..okay multis 7/10
fucker is tazed.. or pocket knives'll do.. my rhymes cuttin' edge, slice n' stifle you
Gangstar just a internet rapper, wannabe "pac".. funny that even HE has "more of a life" than you!!
~Nice personal and punch 7/10
What i write is true, i'll clutch ya waste n' snap ya hip, pull out a switch blade, stab n' flip
kid pack n' quit... ya just got smacked n' ripped.. maybe now ya wack ass wont flap ya lip
~Good multis followed with a personal...nice close 7.5/10

GangsStarShit

I hear you talk shit but there aint no sizing me up,
When u battle in lil letters why u scared to speak up?,
~lol nice personal coulda been better with multis 7/10
Theres a name for band members...faggot ass huney buns,
Theres normally 4 or 5...but u all them "spices" rolled into 1,
~I'm in a band...didnt really like that one 6.5/10
We know u stole that style from capitol...bitch it proves u a biter,
U set urself up for this k.o...u should've named urself...I'M NOT A FIGHTER!,
~First line was a good personal...second one seemed forced 6/10
Big ups to ur recording buddies dawg...no# 2 and no#3,
This guys a joke...jus do ur avy and jack ur buddies,
~Wack attempt at a punch 5/10
And ur punches could never be funny...if u were called Nitrous oxide,
Only way ur entertaining...is when u on rotten.com & we watchin u die,
~Punch didnt really connect...but ya tried 6.5/10

And whats wit ur obsession wit multies...u think it'll make u a more man band?
Coz the truth is...u got no love as a child...
.............momma was too ashamed to hold ur hand,
~Multis win battles, weak punches do not 5/10
One-Man-Band no-man-can flow-as-bad as-this-man,
Rhymes like jam sticky and clammed perhaps u should keep it in the can,
~Hypocrite...obsession with multis then tried to force your close into one big multi 5/10

One-Man-Band= 73.5/100
GansStarShit= 37/70

Vote:One-Man-Band
Reason:Coming with harder punches, more multis and better personals

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and, you were right OMB brothers vote was unexplained...people need to take the time to read and evaluate shit right

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

woord... uppin... haha... im gonna give you your first loss gangstar

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

flow: both
multies: one man band
punches: one man band
personals: gangstar shit
stucture: tie

overall i vote for one man band.. his punchlines devistated you, and as a matter of fact, he did have one good personal about your crew.. that was nice, and the stucture was nice.. lso, his flow was tight but the multies helped his verse more.. multies aren't eveything, but when a battle is so close like this, i have to look at other factors.. but all in all one man took this with better wordplay and punchlines..

please return favor wit a drop in my battle, thanx..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139869

haha OMB....It's a privilege to get merked by OMB for your first loss lmao

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haha... word..

uppin this

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

holly shit OMB blue this dude away....punches hit hard as fuck...mad multies...nice personals...nice mettas...nice vocab and wordplay...FUCKIN AWESOME MULTIES...nice structure....you merked him in every category no questions asked

GangsStarShit....you had decent punches, word play, mettas, not a great vocab...ok mettas....you got merked in every category...no beef...but you got merked...you can use some elevating

v/ OMB return the favor...peace

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