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08-04-04, 11:07 AM
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"Click Clack"
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IP: 6247 B101
Voted For: Triple_N
damn this was hard both were nice... both had good story lines imagery has a tie too it was pretty much close the only thing it comes down to is which one i like more Q- nice story, vocab could of been better , but you still had nice imagery, had me reading the whole way Triple- agian another nice story and yours also had me reading all the way nice imagery better vocab this is close by triple n edged this v/triple n
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08-04-04, 11:58 AM
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#17
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Tha Q
i liked this verse way better... vote q.....the imagry the characters thought process and the end was all good...the end show mass creativity...big up to both yall but unfourtunatly somebody gotta lose vote/ tha q |
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08-05-04, 01:05 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6804 D41F
Voted For: Triple_N
ok triple urs was more realistic lol q work on vocab triple had better vocab but im givin it to triple for a more realistic verse ya feel me no hate thouhg both had gret flow triple wprk on the structure dawg besides that it was a great verse
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08-05-04, 01:06 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Triple_N
i think ya verse was betta becuz ya had betta creatitivy..dont get me wrong both verse was creative but i think yours was more realistic to me........triple n had betta wordplay too.......dats why triple n gets my vote
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08-05-04, 01:06 AM
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#20
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: EECF 4742
if i could vote i would.......... but both yall did ur things.......... hey and spread the love man to my battle.....
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08-05-04, 01:20 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: CEF5 716F
Voted For: Triple_N
damn nice shit,but this is one sided the-q ur verse was ok,i mean there was ok imagery ,no emotion at all in my opinion it was wasnt a good read without emotion sorry elevate triple-n ur vers was pretty nice man u had nice complexity and metaphors,the imagery seemed okay,and u had quite good emotion in this,good job u get my vote v/triple n
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08-05-04, 10:07 AM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP: F0A0 CD0B
^^^ LMAO @ these "votes"...no emotion? hahaaa
ok kiddo... w/e uppin |
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08-05-04, 03:40 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 36C3 7C54
uppin for honest explained votyes...holla back y'all
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08-05-04, 08:27 PM
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That's Gangsta
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IP: 970D 9C87
Voted For: Triple_N
dayum triple N: that was a short structure but your verse was ILL...dayum..your very creative with that shit...your vocab was ill..your imaginary..i culd picture every last word.....your flow was great too..this was a great verse from you...keep it up.. tha q your shit was sick too.......but u lakced great vocab and wordplay..and sum things i culdnt picture..and the beginning i was like..wtf lol..and if u saw the shadow of the kat..how the hell did it look like a person to u....see a giant cat's shadow...dont look like no human too me lol vote triple N rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138871
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