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08-09-04, 02:33 PM
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...tha princess of rv...
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
Voted For: definatfully
SIMPLE..........DEFINATEL WINS THIS. D-BLUE...lotta ur lines dnt rhyme.no punches no nothin. structure is weak.u need to make ur lines tha same length..... id give ur verse 2/10///.u need to elevate. def-some ok metas..no punches really.structure a lil off,but decent.flow woz ok........ 4/10.....jus keep elevatin. vote-d-blue RETURN THA FAV PLZ.links in ma sig
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08-09-04, 10:26 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3C58 486D
Voted For: D-Blue
y is he 1-0, that was really weak verse definatly, ima have to give this to d blue, Structure: Def Punches: D Blue Peronnels: D Blue Rhyme sceme: D Blue Flow: Def Opener  BlueEnding: Def |
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