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Old 08-14-04, 11:12 PM   #16
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Voted For: Lethal Lunatic

OK....no offense but this was a weak battle my vote goes to you cause you had better flow and made sense but its evident u stopped trying at the end. The other emcee did not make much sense and some of his lines were extremely weak or just like fillers. You had good vocabulary which brought out a little bit of the complexity in ur verse but the only punch I think that hit hard was
Yes I am a Gene.ius that only uses a third of his skills to beat-you
Authentik mind Intelligence wit just a word I can defeat-you
pz....
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Old 08-15-04, 01:57 PM   #17
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Voted For: Lethal Lunatic

Lethal Lunatic
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. decent personals..

BiG-WhIt3y
structure isnt very good.. not a lot of consistency with ur line lengths.. flow fell off due to the lack of consistency.. no multis.. wack wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

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neither had multis.. Lethal Lunatic had the better structure.. the better flow.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. Lethal Lunatic gets my vote..

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Old 08-15-04, 04:06 PM   #18
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Voted For: Lethal Lunatic

easy.........ok

lethal good verse nice punches...nice wordplay

whit3y elevate all weak/no punchs, fix ya structure an stuff

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