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Old 08-16-04, 04:30 AM   #16
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myster e got riped demon was more lyrical
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Old 08-16-04, 05:43 AM   #17
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Yo can you explain that further please because that didn't really give sufficient explanation and I don't wanna get the vote DQ'd.

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Old 08-16-04, 10:39 AM   #18
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myster e took this...he had a better flow an he came harder with his punches
 
Old 08-16-04, 12:38 PM   #19
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both came off pretty well in this battle, demon had a better structure in my opinion which would have probably won him this, but im not voting. myster, i felt your vocab was a bit simpleat times, like "it and wit" and you did rhyme "it" to itself a few times. try and up your vocab man !
 
Old 08-16-04, 12:43 PM   #20
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good drop demon, nice opener and closer....just feed not a crew vote
 
Old 08-16-04, 09:02 PM   #21
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Old 08-18-04, 07:10 AM   #22
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Old 08-18-04, 07:29 AM   #23
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Structure - Demon, he had straighter lines, that were more parallel and looked more appealing..

Punches - Demon, he came out immediatley with punchlines and disses, though elusiv did not, plus mercs were a little more creative..

personals, both can elevate here, none really stuck out..

Flow, I guess that this is a tie, i didn't see anything wrong with your flows..

Vocab, both need to elevate. Myster even made no sense in one part, when he said that his rhymes covered in rust.yes they were!Demon: I liked he got Jackson in avatar

Overall, Demon, his verse made more sense and also had better punchlines and stucture which give an overall better verse..
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Old 08-18-04, 01:01 PM   #24
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Old 08-19-04, 02:18 PM   #25
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Old 08-20-04, 10:20 AM   #26
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Old 08-21-04, 05:52 AM   #27
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Old 08-21-04, 11:00 AM   #28
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UPPING!!! C'mon guys, 2 more votes to win. Seal the deal........ rrrrrrrrrr!!!
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Old 08-22-04, 02:25 AM   #29
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Demon gets my vote becuz..he had harder punches than Myster..and that they connected..tha was good..wordplay & structure were ok..7/10
Myser.E. ...yo punches were ok..but not as hard tho..the flow was good..and the structure was a little stretchy...5/10
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