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08-19-04, 06:55 PM

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Voted For: Sonofisis#1

got my vote cause u speakin the truth bout this nigga right here, he ain't comin wit nothin, YET, hes improved a lil but still needs Hella work on his flow, and ur shit seems 2 b developed way stronger.
better punches, more flow,better structure u had it all includin open and close

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08-20-04, 12:22 AM

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08-20-04, 02:25 PM

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breakdown:

Sonofisis#1-nice creative punches and metas "Cow Dung For Ink" that was nice. and ur structure was on point. i see the personal (wink wink) lol anyways nice drop but i dont see how "nachos" and "poem" rhyme homeboy....7.75/10

CODEE-bad punches and structure and horrible flow. you have a lot of things to work on. even tho it was bad it got a lil better as the verse went on. work on structure, flow, and punches for now and you gotta throw in some personals too...4/10

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08-20-04, 02:29 PM

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heres ur vote......................................

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08-20-04, 08:23 PM

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Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Sono.. his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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08-21-04, 01:34 PM

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08-21-04, 10:15 PM

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08-21-04, 11:59 PM

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Sonofisis#1:

opening lines(1-4) were decent,had some comedy...
after that your rhymes just died.

comments:your wordplay was alright,structure was lacking here. your flow was decent, punches were good in beggining and washed up towards the end.Nice opener, was your best line. Closure was not good, only thing you need to work on is the consistancy of a good verse.

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