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IP: 3240 794D
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This was feedback posted for G
IP: BF17 02BB
i gotta give this to G for a better punches,structure and wordplay....his verse is complex...
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IP: 3240 794D
G wins
Note to vbulletin: This, is NOT a vote, but a singnaling to close this thread. G has won. ![]() |
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Peace....for now
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Voted For: G
aiight at times this was even and at times G had it easy. infallible, there were times were the bars didnt connect rhyme wise. n a lot of your bars didnt have punchlines, which is a big downfall.. you need to work on structuring and vocab could probably use a bit of work aswell.. G... aiight, your lines were structured a hell of a lot better and flowed a lot better then infallible, and your punches hit harder. thats why you won this... vote- G |
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