Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

ok dope kustom most your shit is that i saw so far good flow structure still needs help vocab good punches hard as fuck second bar was dope too good ass ender also good opener this was dope your best so far a 9.2/10
qb good drop but your punches were overshadowed here nice closer opener was ok also vocab was good as well as stucture and flow and i liked your verse nice drop a 7/10

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4-1 still uppin 1 vote....lets go....................

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drastic didnt have enough feedback so 3-1 still uppin

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3-1 still uppin..........................................

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Voted For: QBsmasher

Dis cat QBsmasher just come with some funny stuff. I liked the punches about the deliver the film. I get he was using that in conjunction with kustom image. The wordplay was sikk too thru the whole battle I like that. It helps to hype up ya punchline and makes it sound better. The last bar was funny as shit too, about the atari 64.

Kustom aint really throwin any punches to connect with. Played stuff that had been used, I seen some other battles with dis cat and queens bridge was used. Like some shit he put in there after he wrote the other part of the battle somewhere else. Need to work on ya flow and structure kid it just aint workin, no feelin it it sorry.

3-2 still uppin...........................................

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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

i voted for kustum he was all around betta:

punches: kustum
wordplay: kustum
strucure: kustum
flow: both
multis: kustum

he took dis battle wit ease

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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thanks for vote s-s..... still uppi n its 4-2

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yo that vote is broken down just cuz u aint get a catagory doesnt mean anything.................. wow ur a herb 3-2 still uppin [5-2]

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Voted For: QBsmasher

QBsmasher..yo shit was good..nice structure..ncie flow..and yo punches were~pretty hard enuff...
Ku$tUm..yo shit was good too..tha structure suck'd..& yo punches were hard too...

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just feedback, qb- style was simple and had a few hard-hittin' punches.. ku$tum image- ur structure can be a lil' annoyin' but it would sound better if you say it, so i think u won plus ur punches did hit harder but y'all both seem like y'all were missin' complexity (kustum u don't have to put quotations around rhymin' words, better if u used it for metaphors and wordplay), that's feedback.. good luck to the two..

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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

ok:
kustum~nice verse,very creative punches, liked your flow, but structure was off a bit,nice name diss, liked your second and third bars the best, boxing lines are played a little, but delivered nice strong punches here, good job
QB~nice verse as well, liked your last bar,but i just dont think your verse was as strong or creative as kustum's, no hate, because i respect you both, good job both ...1

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Voted For: QBsmasher

Not a whole lot of content to judge, so you needed to come just right to the point with it here.

QBsmasher you were nice with starting out with a personal(im not sure many people can get it though) that I felt was really nice. Starting off the battle is a strong point to have. Your wordplay also is a strong point I notice of yours.

NIce flow and punches were hittin really hard. You dont seem to use multies in your battle for some reason it helps to add to complexity and as well flow, you should consider them.

Kustom Image: You need to work on your wordplay, you dont use any at all in your battles. This helps to hype up your punches and makes them hit harder. I felt QB had harder punches becaus he started right off with a personal that was pretty complex. I noticed the last one you had was a personal but it didnt connect well (as I already heard it from nas)

The flow was also a lil off, your structure just needed some work to clear that up. Some of the multies you were attempting as well, really werent good rhymes. You get a few points for trying them though...but you still get my props just elevate.