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Old 09-02-04, 08:08 PM   #16
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Abstrakt......you took this all the way.....i loved your shit even tho it was stetched......the other dude was wack and his verse was played......not creative at all.......i mean it didn't even rhyme lol.....i like the way you made yours more poetry than hip hop.....it was tight......smooth......i enjoyed reading it.....everything was tight man keep that shit up

*Word* you were so fuckin wack in this........your shit was played.......not even intresting......didn't rhyme at all......i didn't like it.......it was horrible......i didn't like your verse at all......it was boring and sooooooo predictable....man elevate.......not a little man......ELEVATE a lot

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Old 09-02-04, 08:11 PM   #17
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return the favor and vote on my battle......it needs votes.......thanx!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 09-05-04, 09:18 AM   #18
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ha.. Word.. What can I say.. There was no rhyming in your drop.. You need... Nah fuck it your beyond needing elevation.. Just uhh, learn to rhyme??

Abstrakt, Your right it was more poetic than normal rhyming.. But in a topical that is what makes the verse good.

This wasnt even a competition..

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Old 09-05-04, 12:03 PM   #19
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So you want some?

Bring it.

I'll Chav you all to death.

Gimme 50p bruv.
 
Old 09-05-04, 12:58 PM   #20
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checkin this out..
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Old 09-06-04, 05:40 AM   #21
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Hmm Abs u got this...and pretty easy too ya know...word ur verse was wack mom lines are played so when u dissed Abstacts mom in a topical...u kinda dug ur own grave really...plus u had no real point in ur topical no structure flow rhyming it lacked and im being modest...

...Abs nice verse nuff said
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