Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze

Whether with Hi-tek, I work with QUALITY like Talib works with Brother Mos/
You ran from the first battle and came and made another post/
You little brat. You don't need a mic, you need a whoopin' from ya mama/
I simply gave comments for a rap of yours and then you came with all the drama/How mature is that? /
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE PUNCH

Artistry is a passion of mine. You wrote a female version of Emimem's song..How pure is that?/For sure you're wack/
And then you wanna get mad because you lack/
'da skills to test Ms.Skillz, I ain't new to rap/
Perhaps you wanted some mindless minions I gave my honest opinions. Maybe you ain't used to that/
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH MULTIZ IN DER TOO NICE

*smackin' Evyon* Little girl, gimme back my microphone/
Spittin' ya sorry verses like an incompotent witch sends boomerang curses Again, LEAVE 'DA MIC ALONE!/Now while you wilin' KEEP IN MIND THAT I AM FREESTYLING.
During our battles, you be writin' while I KEYSTYLE/
Trust me, if I took even a few SECONDS to write, you would be trying to cop a plea, Child/
I'm still just warmin' up but you don't really want to battle cuz THEN IT'S GONNA BE FOUL
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DAT WAS HOT CLOSA FO SHO NICE GIRL



Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction/
To get your brain relaxin, cause they be actin maniac in action/
A brainiac in fact son, you mainly lack attraction/
You looking zany whack with just a fraction of my tracks spun/
My rhyming skills got you climbing hills/
I travel through your mind until you spine like siren drills/
^^^^^^^^^^^ FLOWZ U MASTERED IT BUT PUNCHES WERE WEAK


I'm sliming grills of roaches, with sprayed on disinfectants/
With some ex rappers till their spinal column disconnects/
We disinfect then check the monologue, turn your system up/
Twist them up, and indulge in the marijuana smoke/
This is the season for noise pollution contamination/
Examination of more cartoons than animation/
My lamination of narration/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LIKE I SAID ON DA 1ST ONE FLOWZ U MASTERED BUT PUNCHES CAME WEAK DA LAST LINE WIHT DA CARTOON IT WAS AIGHT PUNCH


Hit's a snare and bass of track fucked up rapper interrogation/
When I declare invasion, there ain't no time to be stare and gazing/
I turn the stage into a barren wasteland.../
I'm Infinite, yo cant stop me

^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE CLOSA GIRL FO SHO

BUT YO PUNCHES DIDNT COME HARDER DAN MS.SKILLZ SHE HAD HARDER PUNCHES DAN UR'Z

BUT U HAD BOMB ASS FLOWZ WORK ON DEM PUNCHES DEN U'LL GET BETTA FO SHO

V-MS.SKILLZ RETURN AN FAV

Voted For: Eyvon

eyevon easily wins this.eye had the flow and the better lines down good.the opening was pretty good:

Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction/
To get your brain relaxin, cause they be actin maniac in action/
A brainiac in fact son, you mainly lack attraction/
You looking zany whack with just a fraction of my tracks spun/

^that was dope and went good with the flow.ms...you were'nt that great in your verse..you came too basic.

for example:

Whether with Hi-tek, I work with QUALITY like Talib works with Brother Mos/
You ran from the first battle and came and made another post/
You little brat. You don't need a mic, you need a whoopin' from ya mama/
I simply gave comments for a rap of yours and then you came with all the drama/How mature is that? /

that was a weak opener and it was too simple..you need more punches and harder hitting metaphores in your verse.both of you need more nameplay and personals too.if you dont diss the name then a verse is nothing.both came a little less than average..but eye gets the vote.

if you'd like both of you can check my thread in the "emergency help" forum for textees.

Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze

break down

Vocab - Eyvon
Multiz - Ms. Skillz
Structure - Ms. Skillz
Punchlines - Ms. Skillz

Basically Eyvon got murked in my opinion no hate jus statin' my opinion big up`z ta both tho

Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze

uhmmm
aight, skills got this..
some aight wordplay n punches, the BRAT line was humouress, n humour is always a good thing..
maybe could improve structure? didnt have trouble readin it, but its prolly the thing u need to workon most, on the whole, nice drop...
keep em comin girl...

eyvon, ya flow was neither here or there, ya opener lacked the hard hittin personal that ms skills dropped, ta structure need improvin too, but ya had some hella nice lines in there, an ya vocab seemed more complex than ms skills, but ms skills was humouress n better punches, try mixin ya vocab with humouress lyrics n you'll definately goplaces eyvon!

no hates ladies n keep the rhymes comin

p e a c e

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