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Old 09-08-04, 09:26 AM   #16
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YEAH QB SMASHER HAS BEEF WITH ME AND IS TAKING SON OF ISIS SIDE

SO QB YOU CAN FUCK OFF WITH YOUR FUCKIN VOTES

ALSO L FLOWZ YOU MUST HAVE BEEN THE GUY SON OF ISIS WAS REFFERING TO WHNE HE SAID YOU GUYS talked about me for 2 hours on aim.....

SAYIN HOW WACK I WACK, THATS WHY YOU CALLED ME OUT,,,,,

I LIKE HOW SON OF ISIS HELPED YOU WITH YOUR SHIT.....


I ALSO KNOW HE TRYIN TO GET YOU IN CLASSIC SO DONT DENY IT,........,

Thats the thread im reffering too and the second i was done droppin my verse i got mad PMS for SON OF ISIS SAYIN HOW BAD WE MERKED YOU

WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS WE SHIT

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147974
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Old 09-08-04, 09:37 AM   #17
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Voted For: Ice Pick

Niiiiiice Verse ICE
An The Extra Verse Was Tight Too...

But U Hit With Harder Punches n Better Wordplay..
Could Imrpove Ya Structre A Lil, But Nice Drop...
Keep Elevatin...

Lyrical Ya Verse Was Aight Too, Ya Structre Let U Down n Ya Shouldda Tried Mixin Hard Hittin Punches n Personals..
Aight Verse Tho

Keep Em Comin...

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Old 09-08-04, 11:03 AM   #18
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Voted For: lyricalflowz

good drops from both i mean nice battle...
both was on point that whole shit about councils finest was good for ice pick but the personals that flowz brought were crushin the whole sonic link haha... i think pick came with bettah vocad and metahs but personals and wordplay i'd have tah say went tah lyrical i'm all about personal and punches really and i think lyrical came with the stronger combination of both...
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Old 09-11-04, 09:08 PM   #19
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OK ICE PICK THIS IS THE WEAKEST I EVER HEARD FROM YOU THAT FIRST BAR WAS A GOOD OPENER SECOND WAS DIRT AS FUCK THE LOOSE CROWNS SHIT AINT HIT EITHER THE RUSSEL SIMMONS LINE WAS WORDED WRONG GOOD ENDER VERY WEAK VERSE FOR YOU HERE AND NO PERSONALS THAT HIT GOOD YOUR EXTRA BARS HIT HARDER THEN YOUR VERSE FLOW WAS A LITTLE OFF TOO DAMN SUN I THINK YOUR IN THE TOP TEN ON HERE BUT THIS WAS NOT YOU VERY WEAK A 5/10
LYRICAL THIS WAS GOOD A BASICALLY WHOLE VERSE OF PERSONALS PUNCHES AINT HIT THAT HARD BUT NEITHER DID ICEPICKS DISSES WERE SOLID AND LINKS MADE THEM SUPER HARD THATS WHAT GAVE YOU A BETTER VERSE HERE THAT PHONE SHIT WAS DOPE THAT WHITE TEE SHIT WAS FUNNY THE RAPPER SHIT WAS BLAH BUT OK STRUCTURE WAS BETTER THEN ICE AND FLOW TOO 6/10
BASICALLY FLOW HAD HARDER AND WAYYYYYYYY MORE PERSONALS AND THAT PULLED HIM THROUGH HERE
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Old 09-11-04, 10:05 PM   #20
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Yeah he also had son of isis
help him with this sit

THIS WAS SO PREWRITTEN IT WASNT FUNNY

WETHER HE ADMITS IT OR NOT

HIM AND SON OF ISIS THOUGHT THEY PULLED A FAST ONE ON ME
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Old 09-15-04, 08:52 PM   #21
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aye yo uppin this for you guys...just want to see wat the vote count is.......but if oyu wanmt me to vote send me a pm
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Old 09-15-04, 08:55 PM   #22
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Voted For: lyricalflowz

Both of you came good iight battle nice verses
Lyrical: your shit was nice good verse overall nice lnies some funny one too you had funny but good personals made mer ROFL ok punches though though you could do some rewording init yuou hade nice good strucutre and ok flow

Ice Pick: ya shit was iight to you had some messed up strucutre and ok flow ya punches were iight and same with ya personals

VOte: Lyrical for a better verse

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Old 09-15-04, 09:09 PM   #23
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Can't vote on this one, so I'm just checkin' the polls. Ice Pick, we should battle sometime, no beef just a suggestion...
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Old 09-15-04, 10:26 PM   #24
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Yeah i guess we could do that

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Old 09-16-04, 12:15 PM   #25
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Voted For: lyricalflowz

Ice Pick ...structure was a lil bit off but tha flow was still good ... you had sum aight punches ... nice wordplay too ...

Lyrical flowz ... Structure was better than ice's ... personals were comin left right and centre ... he was outdone on that level ... nice wordplay and metas ...

Overall ... lyrical got this coz his structure was better ... plus them mad personals ... ice ya still had sum nice punches though ...
 
Old 09-16-04, 04:44 PM   #26
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More Wack Votes

Fuckin People Are A Joke

Im A Let This Slide Since I Fucin Sucked In This Battle

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Old 09-16-04, 11:29 PM   #27
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ice pick won. i didnt even finish readin the other dudes
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Old 09-18-04, 12:38 PM   #28
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Whoa Damn Lyrical Flow

Nigga Had Personals And Punches And Wordplays~! Omg Merked Ice Pick To Da Death,,,,,,,,, I Cant Vote But I Wish
 
Old 09-19-04, 02:29 AM   #29
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pick- nah man. the punches were just.......gone. i wasnt feeli ya verse, but i know u can do better. so just for the adaquete feedback...punches blah, personlas blah, wordplay blah, structure was ok, flow was iight just come harder next time.....4/10

LF- ehh ive seen better. and im serious about the links...STOP!!! no more links and dont explain unless u really have to. punches iight, wordplay blah, structure coo, flow bad, personals blah keep tryin and get more complex and witty....6/10

RTF....links in the sig.
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