both were good nice shit it was okjst checking score

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thanks uppin

Voted For: NoMercy

k i vote fo u cuz ur punchez and rhyme is better than his

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just feed back....i cant vote no-mercy in mah crew and shake-spare my boi...peep the sig lol k.o lol mah bad shake.....

but if i were to vote it would be shake b.c of word play and multis...... both punches were about the same along with personals...... no mercy not tryin to bad mouth ya i just saw it as he came harder....but good luck to both of u nice key styles....payce

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Voted For: shake-spear

Im Votin For shake, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But shake Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

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Voted For: NoMercy

ehh, decent battle i guess =/

punches- N.M. (shake came way too simple)
personas- none =/
werdplay- N.M. (kinda simple tho)
vote- N.M.

N.M. try to use multi's more that'll make ye verse stand out and it will add to the flow.

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Voted For: shake-spear

alright...i'm grading this on a curve..........and no mercy lowers the average...

he go around tellin poeple hes young. wut u want pitty?/
well its pitiful i can keystyle and beat u that proves u shitty/

decent punch/personal 6/10

no wordplay needed and multi's would destroy-u-fast/
how ya record trash dumbass u think u nice well boy-u-gased/

this was ok...nothin special...6/10

he know he gon lose so he bets shake'll win to earn-cash/
and i would throw ya rhyme book away but fuck it i burn-trash

pretty good...7/10


ull learn-fast, cause nomercy beatin me is ridiculous/
make u lick-ya-lips ,pucker up, and give my dick-a-kiss/

this was funny....8/10

if dis kid-is-sick he da common cold im syphilis/
battlin me is like suicide u might as well have slit-ya-wrist/

nice closer...9/10

over all..36/50

After im threw with you you’ll be resting in the cafeteria/
Ill be runnin all over you like im a sick disgusting germ called bacteria/.

simple and kind of amature, 4/10

This mothafucka “shake-spear” wanna take me down to my knees/
But ill be the first to make him drop down and put his hands up and freeze/.

same as before 4/10

He’ll recognize me as the crazy one that runs all over him like a flock of flys/
Ill drop you so fast ill be the one to be saying my good-bye’s/

flock of flies? never heard of such a thing......2/10

Now ill be spitin hard vocab you’ll hafe to look them up in the dictionary/
Ill make you so pist at me ill make you fly yer pussy ass outta her like a faggot canary/.

this was funny.....but not to your advantage....4/10


My style of rap is unknown to you its like im an affection/
To you and how I do it so you better find something for yer own protection/.

this was weak.....3/10


sorry no mercy, your getting better and better, you just need to start using some complexity and wordplay.....shake's didn't use much of it...but he didn't need to...his understanding of battling won this over easy....nice verse for bein keyed shake..

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alright good vote thanks for the feedback but i dont understand this shit man im only 14 wordplay i got that i geuss you didnt look lol and ya it was a blind spit

Hotter and you killed his rhyme, he had no flow, and you showed your flow was better

"if dis kid-is-sick he da common cold im syphilis/
battlin me is like suicide u might as well have slit-ya-wrist/"

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Voted For: NoMercy

i think this was a pretty close match but no mercy jus pulled out on top. he had sum good vocab n a nice flow. he need jus a lil betta punchlines n he coulda wont it in a qwik min. but besides that he had sum good rhymes so my votes goes to no mercy

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^thanks uppin

lol ok the votes are tied it should be ova by now but some votes were dq'd but thx anyways uppin

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well well well...nomercy, should be more like"NoMc"... if you want some play'a just get at me...

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