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Old 09-11-04, 12:36 AM   #16
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Old 09-11-04, 02:43 AM   #17
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Livin Legend -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was too stretchy...

.:SnoOk:. -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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Old 09-11-04, 07:03 AM   #18
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Old 09-11-04, 12:06 PM   #19
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Old 09-11-04, 06:25 PM   #20
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Old 09-11-04, 10:35 PM   #21
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DO I HAVE TO EXPLAIN HELL NO~ LIVIN GOT DIS HANDS DOWN NO DOUBT PUNCHES FLOWIN AND FLOWZ FLOWIN NICE MAYNE

SNOOK WORK ON DEM PUNCHES MAYNE ITS GOOD U CAME OUT AND TRIED MAYNE// U HAD GOOD FLOWZ AND PUNCHES BUT LIVIN CAME HARDER NO BEEF MAYNE

~PEACE~ RETURN AN FAV

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Old 09-12-04, 12:53 AM   #22
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Old 11-25-04, 11:59 AM   #23
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why aint yall muh fuckaz postin shyt on hurr? uppin fo some voterz.......ya hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrd?
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Old 12-02-04, 12:59 PM   #24
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this was battle wasnt that great, both of ya'll drop alot of played out punches, so im gonna decide this on flow and delivery, which i felt living legend did a little better, snook the dick jokes are so played and you talked about his penis for about 4 lines which kinda throws the reader off.
vote -living legend
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Old 12-11-04, 11:16 AM   #25
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This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to LL flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, SNOOK had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
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I know its a lil weak but its ok
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Old 12-11-04, 12:26 PM   #26
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This was a close one but Livin Legend took this one. He overall had better flow, and vocab. It definately had more versatility, whereas Snook's verse basically focused on one topic... soo.... my vote goes to LL.
 
Old 12-11-04, 12:47 PM   #27
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just check'in polls nice to see u'r back at battling my old V.T fam...

holla N stay up...
 
Old 12-15-04, 02:58 PM   #28
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weak battle but snook won by a second rhyming was kinda basic but he had a nice flow metas were kinda weak and punches didnt really hit
livin had an aight verse but it didnt flow rhymes was aight metas barley there and punches didnt hit his first half of his verse was bout g-unit and he bit his frist line from 50 cent wich isnt a good line anyway
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Old 12-15-04, 03:10 PM   #29
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yo dis was a alright battle but im goin to have to give dis one to Livin Legend cuz i think his punches hit harder and he had better structure, word play and flow

Snook ur verse was iight but it didnt get my attention he had some alright punches and his structure was iight but u need to work on it some moe...

Dis one goes to Livin Legend.....~1~
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