RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 09-15-04, 05:44 PM   #16
~IiL PrOpHeT~
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 476
Joined: Sep 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 15-5
IP: 7BE2 A0A1

Voted For: Lost & Found

um lyricalsolja u need to learn how to read

it says post yo verse in da box

do u have an verse=no

ok lost&found got dis hands down i dont have to explain

Removed.. wrong verse posted
 
Old 09-15-04, 06:50 PM   #17
Adam
 
Posts: 13,384
Joined: Jul 2004
From: Canada
Status: Offline
Text Record: 28-0
Audio Record: 1-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja

IP: A0C8 44A9

yo, you might wanna tell a mod about this shit....
 
Old 09-15-04, 07:43 PM   #18
Abraxas
Bonecrushing Nigga
 
Posts: 5,838
Joined: Jul 2004
From: 305
Status: Offline
Text Record: 14-3
This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja

IP: 9275 0703

haha wat an idiot posted here
__________________
Guess who?...



...Paramik Fuckin'...


...Owns You!


||RVS Text Champion||
Send a message via AIM to Abraxas  
Old 09-16-04, 04:29 AM   #19
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
Posts: 3,170
Joined: Dec 2003
From: (210)
Status: Offline
IP: 03AF 5452

Uppin..
__________________
I Beat Up Asshole Fathers For Free





Quote:
Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
Send a message via AIM to Lyriclesolja Send a message via MSN to Lyriclesolja  
Old 09-16-04, 07:13 PM   #20
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
Joined: Sep 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 1-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja

IP: B1AB 4B61

close battle

punches- solja
personals- neither
multis- lost
multas- solja
word play- solja
flow- lost

Solja good hard punches and good punchlines. kept me chucklin. decent wordplay but no personals.

Lost i liked your verse but your punches werent as hard, so work on that. other than that just keep elevatin.

Solja:
"after this battle when he tryes to get wit a crew he wont lern,
they wont let him in cause i placed him on injured reserve," nice punch.

Lost:
"u drop soft, beat off your lines.......just`a make hard....
and ur lyrics are outta this world.................
............................when u hit the fuckin space bar!!" nice wordplay and punch.

v/solja if i could vote
 
Old 09-16-04, 07:26 PM   #21
distilled
hullabaloser
 
distilled's Avatar
 
Posts: 7,459
Joined: May 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 5-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: CCAE A7E8

Voted For: Lost & Found

LF took this battle, it was a close one, but he got it.

Lol, that one made me laugh tho
top it wit pain, i'm crushin ya brain, stoppin your thoughts
ur verse wouldnt even hit the ground.............
........................................if u were droppin it off!

best bar of the battle, and that won it for me.

Solja, you came close but he really took this one
__________________

.The Council
Send a message via AIM to distilled Send a message via MSN to distilled Send a message via Yahoo to distilled  
Old 09-17-04, 03:01 AM   #22
Mistic-Rogue
Lyrical Prosperity
 
Mistic-Rogue's Avatar
 
Joined: Sep 2004
From: New Zealand
Status: Offline
Text Record: 8-6
IP: F848 DAA7

Voted For: Lyriclesolja

vote to lyriclesolja cuase he had better flow, better pnches,better ending. its was tricky shit!
 
Old 09-17-04, 05:03 AM   #23
¤ÐÅž¤
leave you rest'n pz's
 
¤ÐÅž¤'s Avatar
 
Posts: 4,321
Joined: Sep 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 22-7
IP: 511D E1B4

Voted For: Lost & Found

solja not a very hard hittin verse,your personal wasnt very good nameplay,it lacked in creativity by alot,your flow was off on certain points like 4 example the iraqi boarder line...
nothin else stood out,srry did'nt come hard enough in this...
lost n found,nice verse consistent,couple lines were weak but you kept up with punches n i liked your closer,but lay off the gunplay"sawed off in the ribs"??.come up with something better then that but overall you had the better verse n stronger punches....
return the favour....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149670
__________________
i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 09-17-04, 06:28 PM   #24
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
Posts: 3,170
Joined: Dec 2003
From: (210)
Status: Offline
IP: 03AF 5452

Uppin...
__________________
I Beat Up Asshole Fathers For Free





Quote:
Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
Send a message via AIM to Lyriclesolja Send a message via MSN to Lyriclesolja  
Old 09-18-04, 05:26 AM   #25
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
Posts: 3,170
Joined: Dec 2003
From: (210)
Status: Offline
IP: 03AF 5452

Uppin..
__________________
I Beat Up Asshole Fathers For Free





Quote:
Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
Send a message via AIM to Lyriclesolja Send a message via MSN to Lyriclesolja  
Old 09-23-04, 12:45 PM   #26
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
Posts: 3,170
Joined: Dec 2003
From: (210)
Status: Offline
IP: 03AF 5452

Uppin..
__________________
I Beat Up Asshole Fathers For Free





Quote:
Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
Send a message via AIM to Lyriclesolja Send a message via MSN to Lyriclesolja  
Old 09-24-04, 04:41 AM   #27
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
Posts: 3,170
Joined: Dec 2003
From: (210)
Status: Offline
IP: 03AF 5452

Uppin..
__________________
I Beat Up Asshole Fathers For Free





Quote:
Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
Send a message via AIM to Lyriclesolja Send a message via MSN to Lyriclesolja  
Old 09-24-04, 01:34 PM   #28
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
Posts: 3,170
Joined: Dec 2003
From: (210)
Status: Offline
IP: 03AF 5452

Uppin...........................
__________________
I Beat Up Asshole Fathers For Free





Quote:
Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
Send a message via AIM to Lyriclesolja Send a message via MSN to Lyriclesolja  
Old 09-24-04, 05:31 PM   #29
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
Posts: 3,170
Joined: Dec 2003
From: (210)
Status: Offline
IP: 03AF 5452

Uppin..............
__________________
I Beat Up Asshole Fathers For Free





Quote:
Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
Send a message via AIM to Lyriclesolja Send a message via MSN to Lyriclesolja  
Old 09-26-04, 05:59 PM   #30
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
Posts: 3,170
Joined: Dec 2003
From: (210)
Status: Offline
IP: 03AF 5452

Uppin............................................. .
__________________
I Beat Up Asshole Fathers For Free





Quote:
Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
Send a message via AIM to Lyriclesolja Send a message via MSN to Lyriclesolja  
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 05:39 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.