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09-20-04, 12:34 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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This was feedback posted for Triple_N
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
wow, nice verse man, uppin for the crew...........
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09-20-04, 04:00 PM
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This was feedback posted for Triple_N
IP: ACF7 DAC4
just checkin the polls.......Mindz Kollide stand up.....
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09-20-04, 07:19 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for Triple_N
IP: 5043 32F4
yo empire you got Ko'ed lol no ofense but triple is way more played with punches but i cant vote we the same crew
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09-20-04, 09:30 PM
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This was feedback posted for Triple_N
IP: AF76 A123
i think empire took this....tripple n your punches were pretty good..and one stood out...it was by the best punch in the battle
Closet homos insinuate gayness to cover theirs, proven by shrinks Empire has accused others of it over 200x, hmm..makes ya think and the one about beef was true too...but over all...line for line..i thought empire came harder
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09-20-04, 11:52 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 50A2 19E5
Voted For: Empire
AIght u got this but really u gotta elavate jus a lil but your rhymes are good 9/10 structure is a 8/10 and your punchlines are 10/10 so tripple n keep practicein and u can get sum ppl aight so my vote goes to-----> Empire Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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09-21-04, 12:16 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: CEF5 716F
Voted For: Triple_N
damn empire u had good punches but they didnt hit hard but some did,ur flow was good,ur structure was nice man,u had good vocab and personals iguess,ur opener was okay,but your closer was poo poo....i also liked the wordplay set into your verse dawg.... triple your punches were good man they hit hard...although the first couple lines were wack..u raped this kid towards the end and the rest of your verse,ur flow was coo,and the structure was dope also,ur vocab and wordplay was nice in this too....nice personals towards the end,wack opener and a hard hitting coler that did damage overall both had good wordplay,vocab,structure,flow,and okay personals in this,but with better and hard hitting punches im gonna say triple n takes this....empire not bad man props v/triple n
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09-21-04, 12:29 AM
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Ask About Me
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IP: 0594 6E13
Voted For: Triple_N
aight hee we go i say htat trioke n wins this TRIPLE N: you got this becuz you actually had good punches and good personlas......that beef line was aight....you shoudl have just used alil more meta4s and liek one more perosnal....but all ina ll good battle.. empire: no hate just waas only feelin the gay lines those were the only good lines...but i aint homo pobic or nothin so i didnt really care.......but yeah i think since you battlin so much you are fallin offf but just calm down with the battlin....but good spit though...im lookin foward to battle you vote=triplen
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09-21-04, 01:21 AM
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
Voted For: Empire
way betta personals personals win battles, shit more flow and structure, and vocab was a wee betta Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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09-21-04, 05:36 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
Voted For: Triple_N
This was a hard decision... didnt wanna vote on either one in case i changed my mind.. lol.. cos they were both good.. but.. Empire: Good flow, good backed up punches... But i wast feelin ya metas and wordplay.. It's not as good if you dont get wordplay straight away, n ya have to read explinations n all that shit... But it was a nice verse. Some original and witty stuff in there. Triple: Ya flow fell off BIG TIME at some points... but only like twice.. then ya got it back on quick.. Made up for it with them punches though.. some good shit.. and nice personals.. ^^no disrespect.. cos you both came well... but voters gotta make choices... -_-
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09-21-04, 07:11 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
Voted For: Triple_N
aiiiiiiiiight Triple N Got this.... more complex verse, better structre n punches, loved the finisher too, nice drop N... empire, ya flow was ...BLAH, it was neither here or there, some of ya punches hit hard, but other lines failed you, TRIPLE N got the more consistent verse thats why im votin for him... return the fave in my sig P E A C E Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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09-22-04, 03:37 PM
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... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
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IP: 7C76 2835
Voted For: Triple_N
This goes to triple, easily in my opinion... Empire ya verse started out okay, had some decent personals thrown in there except for the mexican wages line, it didn't make sense... but after you got past ya 5th line, wit the "racist pics" line, it went downhill... that really threw off ya flow, and took away from the rest of ya verse...i mean u tried rhymin "battle" and "shadow".. WTF? Your closer was decent, but you coulda done more wit it, or made more lines with it Triple N you had a nice verse... opener was nice, hit hard and gave you a good start...Next 4 lines were so/so, but the exercise line killed it, it was a hard hittin personal and was funny as fuck... Also ya closer was nice, and i think it's important to have a solid opener and closer, it makes your overall verse better...Some of ya lines were played, like the "beef" line, but it wasn't bad and didnt' take away from the rest of your verse... Overall my vote goes to Triple, he had harder hitting punches and better personals, and he stayed more consistent throughout his verse than empire did... V/ Triple N
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