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09-22-04, 01:13 AM
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If thats what you thought
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IP: D35B 3F85
Voted For: Poet
Poet: flow was decent. Punches were not as hard but had a sense of humor to them. A few personals. structure was not great but better then shotta's. Your verse is not vet material nothing really great. Shotta: Nice opener. I couldn't flow with your verse that good. so your flow was off. Punches were okay. A few hit harder then poets. But this was not great at all. Have to go with poet on this one return the favor
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09-22-04, 01:27 AM
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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
IP: 5671 DBDD
Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo You Fucking Suck Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp in
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09-22-04, 01:54 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Word, ofcoarse its not vet material.. I never do normal battles lmao..
UPPIN THIS SHIZZNIT |
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09-22-04, 02:25 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
Voted For: Poet
shotta... wasnt really feelin ya verse .. flow was sorty wierd.. structure messed.. aight punches i guess.. but ya personals didnt really hit hard.. n whas with the speech marks where theres no wordplay????????? i seen way better from you.. -_- poet: WAY shitter than ya topicals.. lol.. But still good.. nuthin wrong with flow, or punches.. but there was no lines that made me laugh or go "Ooo" .. why arent you dope! its not that hard.. its just like a topical where the topic is shottaboy no hate one
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09-22-04, 04:14 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Because I dont usually rap with disses n shit.. And I wrote it in about 20 minutes so blah...
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09-22-04, 11:30 AM
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poet made me want to keep reading this. nice verse homie
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09-22-04, 10:25 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 01C3 560C
Uppin again........................................
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09-23-04, 03:22 AM
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IP: 03AF 5452
Voted For: Poet
This was a one sided battle.. ... Opener-Poet Closer-Poet Flow-Poet Structure-Poet Punches-Tied Metas-Poet (Shotta had little to none) Personals-Poet Overall Best Verse-Poet Advise to shotta-try to get your structure better your lines go from short to long and back to short quick......and try to get more personals and work on your punches and if you do this you will see more votes goin your way!......Vote/Poet |
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