anyone gonna vote? uppin

uppin fuck vote already god dammit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg! uppin vote muther fuckers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ha good drop....

this should be a W for ya.....

ex aint drop no complex no real punches more like hes talking...

good luck.....

V.T

Voted For: N.E.T

N.E.T won this by far, very nice rhyme scheme a few hooks thrown in that round and all of them landed "I put dashes-in-to-stretch-my-words-like-elastic
But when I say your whack, its true, im not being sarcastic"

"Stop, quit, drop the mic, get fired or retire
You spit a little bit of heat and now you think you’re on fire"

why: exclusive didn't give me enuff oooohh'z and aaahhh'z i need lyrics that make me wish i had of thought of that better luk next time exclusive everday we get better righjt? Vote on my battles pimpz, i'm out

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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

break down....but 1st i gotta say good battle strong match up both sick....

Structure - Xclusive - barz were close in length NET'z wuz uneven
Flow - Xclusive - rhymez wuz on point...all wordz were a perfect match 4 rhymez
Punchez - NET - harder punchez
Multiz - None
Vocab - Xclusive - definently used more complex wordz then NET did
Personalz - Xclusive - didn't realli have any but still had more then NET did

...anyway like i said sick battle xclusive took it tho i felt pretty much all his shit but yeah big up`z ta both keep y'all shit up man but anyway
VOTE = Xclusive

Voted For: N.E.T

Damn...dope battle boys, props to ya both, can only have one winner tho so lets break it down a little shall we...

Opener - net, Exs wasnt really a punch, nets opened nicely
Closer - Ex, Nets was self-glorifying and weak
Punches - net, Exs were alright, just not his best work that ive seen
Personals - Neither used any
Metas - net, ex didnt used any
Multies - Tie, both were equal in this area (1 or 2 each)
Structure - Tie, both were organized and lines were even (coulda been longer guys - UNLIMITED!)
Vocab - Ex, this was very close but Ex was more consistant with his vocab
Wordplay - Ex, he used dope wordplay throughout his verse
Comedy - net, I made this category just for the adams apple line, hahaha, fuckin hilarious, plus i didnt really fine Exs verse that funny

As you can see above ^^^, this was a very close/entertaining battle to read, but overall I feel Net had harder and more consistant punches, although Ex had a fuckin dope verse, I was just feelin nets hard ass punches and flow. No hate boys, I just critique them as I see'em ya know. Someones gotta win, no beef, payce.

Voted For: N.E.T

Emcee:~{exclusive}~

Verse:This kid called me on, not knowing the meaning of romance…
In fact don’t make me play him before the times up before I advance/
I already won, you got no chance but ill wait for yer rhymes to progress…
If I hafe to ill just spit a quick freestyle like I was haven fun with you in recess/
My rhymes will make him never regret it, so ill leave him and upset…
He’ll feel like I burned him with the hot spark from my cigarette/
Its up to you if you want to stay here cuz ill win, its you decision…
If you choose to stay you’ll end up at the doctors needin an incision/
You must be mad cuz of the way my style is meen and vicious…
Why did you hafe to sneak up and take a look, yer way to suspicious/


Comments:im not gonna D-r im gonna vote honestly i think that you need to elevate in ur metas and get some sick punches out there no hate whatsoever...if you work on this i guarantee youll be just that much better...

Marks:
Wordplay - 5/10
Metas - 3/10
Vocabulary - 4/10
Structure - 6/10
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 5/10
Closer – 6/10
Personals – 5/10
Enjoyment – 3/10
Creativity - 4/10
Overall - 47/100
----------47%

Emcee:N.E.T

Verse:
Stop, quit, drop the mic, get fired or retire
You spit a little bit of heat and now you think you’re on fire
I’ll serve him on a plate after I beat and kicked him
Swallow him whole, sick him back up, then he’s a recycled victim
You couldn’t beat me if I give you cheats or even a walk through
I’ll put a bullet in your throat, so your Adams apple has someone to talk to
Then I’ll murder this bitch, then do it again and then
Leave him shaking, and it won’t be the adrenaline
I put dashes-in-to-stretch-my-words-like-elastic
But when I say your whack, its true, im not being sarcastic
You’ll look back at this and say it was an historical session
Is he whack? Don’t answer, that’s a rhetorical question
We all know the answer; it’s a well known fact
Let’s just say you’re an average rookie, and let that be that
I aim at your temple for the immediate takedown
You’re an enzyme, when I raise the heat, you begin to breakdown
sorry to disappoint but i just raised and beat ya
Dat AK will concept, and teach cha

Comments:kid sick drop i liked some of your metas but some of them werent as good...good job you win by metas and some vocab

Marks:
Wordplay - 6/10
Metas - 6/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 6/10
Punches - 7/10
Opener - 5/10
Closer – 3/10
Personals – 4/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 7/10
Overall - 56/100
----------56%

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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

Exclusive took this due to the better punches, structure, flow, and vocab, i wasn't feeling both your verses though...

Exclusive wasn't going that hard at the kid, but enough to win, he has better flow, vocab and structure, some of the lines was a bit stretched....aight verse

N.E.T, next time you write a rap, please fix your structure, see exclusive's verse, each line is nearly as long and even as each other, aight? And focus on the topic, dont start hyping yourself, there's no point, where's the diss in that? And unless theres a diss on how he can't rap, limit your trash talk, saying I'm put a bullet in your throat etc

vote Exclusive

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Voted For: N.E.T

my vote n.e.t
i like the verse from the start till the finish
had better flow better punches had more creativeness in hes lines he could of came better with the intro and ending but it was decent enough nice drop as-well from X i thought u had a decent flow some decent lines punches diss and all but i found it easy to follow and understand N.E.T verse better close battle but N.E.T gets my vote

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i cant believe these wqack votes lol i won this lol look at his wack lines theres nothing good in them haha
uppin

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

aiight battle it was pretty weak...
opener - exclusive
loser - N.E.T
flow - elclusive
punchez - exclusive
vocab - exclusive
v - exclusive no hate net but his was jsut better...... no hate man...

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^not even explained lol whats up with that man?
uppin