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IP: 1E2A 16F7
Voted For: J-Will
i vote for jwill cuz he took this battle the hole way his structer was alittle off but his wordplay was iight vocab was good punches was on point not jwill best of battles skano ur was doin ur thing but u didnt write enough next time write more honest vote return a favor Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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IP: F98A 46E1
Voted For: skano
Lol.. Jay:That shit was dumb wack, your like a generic Cassidy...your punches were weak as fuck, and you kept talking in your verse and splitting the shit up...shits gay...dont do that ever again. And then the structure...gay...go look at other battles to see what type of structure you should use. skano: Ok, i liked the 'phone line' line, and the paper cut was witty...you had harder hitting punches, the verse was less boring and the structure was actually readable...so vote. Skano
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New to RV
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IP: 904F 71CB
Voted For: skano
Vote: skano, both came wack, but he had some wittier things in his verse, so basically, he just takes it. i was close tho, both were wack. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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Moderator
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IP: CA4D B048
Voted For: skano
skano good structure.. flow was on target.. no multis.. dope wordplay.. dope concepts.. most of ur punches connected.. no personals.. J-Will wack structure.. like, all of ur lines were stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchness.. good multis.. decent wordplay.. bad concepts.. they werent original at all.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals.. Overall J-Will had more multis.. neither had good personals.. skano had the better structure.. the better flow.. the better wordplay.. the better concepts, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. skano gets my vote.. VOTE - SKANO |
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To The Ground...
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IP: 033C B567
Voted For: skano
i liked Skano's verse A LOT more, the other kids concepts were so old and played and just everything, i have no idea how he even competes with this, good job to the both of you but Skano CLEARLY took this i mean the other kids structure was just terrible you need to fix that and your punches were the same too, good job to the both but Skano took this due to punches and structural differences.. v/ Skano
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23-7, 16 Knockouts
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This was feedback posted for J-Will
IP: 3240 794D
i think yall niggaz need to elevate cuz yall rappin is SHIT(no hate)
but yall do need to eleveate yall game |
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Flyweight
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IP: E923 2DB7
Voted For: skano
ha ha punches-skano pers-none met-none mul-none stukta-skano skano won his punches actuly land the other guy was 100%wack ha ha that guy got beat by a 100% newb ta ha he kicked ur ass pz |
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Light Weight
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IP: A621 A1C1
Voted For: skano
skano owned jwill cause he ad better wordplay and punches in his verse.J's verse had a bizzare tructure and his wordplay was very basic with nothing complex to it.It made it even more boring to read when you added the .... and the "'s and all the elementar vocab in your verse. skano,you came pretty hard even though you half assed(if its true).You pretty much won with your first bar wich was witty and original.J will,elevate with your punches and your vocab. V/skano return the fav. |
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