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Old 10-13-04, 02:28 PM   #16
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uppin' this shit. lol I noticed this kid be dissin' my granpa too. lol wow. upp...
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Old 10-13-04, 02:30 PM   #17
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how the fuck did i know he would vote?^^^lmfao. he had more creativity. ok thats it, i cant fucking take this herb ass site anymore. when you people see something that you dont think is "dope" or "good" or whatever, try reading it a couple times to see if you actually get the punch. obviously, you fags didnt. thats ok tho.

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Old 10-13-04, 02:41 PM   #18
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Voted For: Socrates

Vote - Socrates
Reason:
Spul came personal....and showed pictures.....but didnt have hardly any hard punches at all...and most of it seemed to be comments....nothing stood out...and your verse just seemed kinda meh......you didnt put good use to the concepts at hand....Socrates had better concepts and actually a couple nice ones with witty lines...therefore...he wins for harder punches.....
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Old 10-13-04, 03:37 PM   #19
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Vote- Socrates..

punches- socrates, had really funny ones..
personals- socrates, funny again with the ghostwriting..
creativity- socrates, talking to myself line, l's up, and all about you line.

vote- socrates..

pretty nyce battle, but in my opinion socrates came hard and was enough to get thru..with te win
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why doesnt it count my vote?. .
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Old 10-13-04, 05:38 PM   #21
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^cuz you don't got 500 posts. and I kno you and Smoka are AIM buddies, Soc. But I don't care, I respect his vote. uppin' this
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Old 10-13-04, 05:42 PM   #22
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^cuz you don't got 500 posts. and I kno you and Smoka are AIM buddies, Soc. But I don't care, I respect his vote. uppin' this


exactly why he voted, i dunno. i asked him to look at it and tell me who he thought won, i specifically told him not to vote, cuz i respect his opinion but i aint gunna sink to your level. after i told him i was losing, he wanted to vote, take that up with him, not me
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Old 10-13-04, 05:50 PM   #23
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personals spul he used pictures and links
creativeness spul phanton ur punches were pretty played and kinda corny lol
both could work on vocab
both had pretty good flow
spul needs to work on structure lol
overall good battle but spul came more creative and with more personals props to both
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Old 10-13-04, 06:23 PM   #24
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This was feedback posted for Socrates

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you are shit to me, something mist be wrong in your skull
so here goes nothing bitch.........................SPuL
man im better and thats how it will always be duke
of course my verse is whack man, its all about you!
for real SPuL bites so much youd figure hed be full for days
Iight ill put away the jokes, i dont need personals anyways
Dont know SPuL? heres a quick bio: everybody fuckin hates him
While others continue to raise the bar, he continues to take them
feel sad for your grandpa? fuck ill leave you in worse health
say you put my L'S uP? nah thats just you twisting yourself

You had 5 bars that were ok-nice.

Vs Spuls 3 ok bars.
Which inturn gives you the win.

Kinda raised your game here not bad at all.
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Old 10-13-04, 06:26 PM   #25
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You're a "pedofile", you'll rape that kid, to see us lose
But yo rhymes are more misleadin' than yo stash of "Jesus Juice"
You're also fuckin' fat, ears big, nose jus like Nomar
Fuck Phantom of the Opera, you're the Shadow of the Oprah
Go to witness protection, you pussy. Change yo name jus like Calamity
Have you behind a "Bush"... like yo name was Sean Hannity

These were the 3 bars that Spul produced that were ok.
Not ground breaking..
You need to up your game a lot.

Not a bad battle tho.

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Old 10-13-04, 07:18 PM   #26
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Voted For: Socrates

v. Socrates

A lot of it was played, but it was still kinda witty at parts... like the here goes nothing line, the raise the bar line, etc.

However, you kinda stayed on the same punch the whole way, a lot of your lines were blah.

Spul hasn't seemed to improve at all since I left. If anything, you've gotten worse. Your lines lacked wit, originality, nice personals, etc.
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Old 10-13-04, 07:55 PM   #27
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Voted For: SPuL

LMAO... both had dope verses.. it was a very close battle i would say.. but i think spul really stepped it up here.. he hasnt shown much lately.. but this battle he really came hard... good punches and personals.. phantom u came hard nice punches too.. but i think spuls punches hit harder.. both had good flow and structure.. but i gotta go with spul here he just edged it with his personals and punches.. good job to both.. no hate..
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