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Old 10-17-04, 08:00 AM   #16
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upin.............................................. .....
 
Old 10-17-04, 12:06 PM   #17
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Voted For: sabotage

yo man no doubt you won:
but first let me say what was wrong with frein-master did wrong:
first and most important:
your style was horribale i think you might have done everything wrong wit it first the //'s stop that second the bold letter, we no what the good lines are when we read it so no need for it third ____________ same thing as the bold letters.
ok second:
your flow sometimes it was short lines and then therew were long one and stop with the () i have no idea why you usew them
now thrid:
lyrics were pretty bad. i think it because your style and flow was bad. There was some good lines but alot just seemed played out
one think you did good was mults you had mad mults but that does win battles

ok sabotage:
first i don't like the new name
but everything else looked good
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Old 10-17-04, 01:36 PM   #18
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ok uppin 4 votes.....................................
 
Old 10-17-04, 02:02 PM   #19
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Just to tell youy.... you verse was pretty much all over the place which lost you allot of points... i was iight... but no need for he bolding and your "merked ko thing...
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Old 10-17-04, 04:31 PM   #20
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wow wat herbs......anyway uppin...................................
 
Old 10-17-04, 08:08 PM   #21
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uppin this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
 
Old 10-17-04, 09:23 PM   #22
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This was feedback posted for sabotage

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checkin..........................TC............... .........
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 10-17-04, 10:41 PM   #23
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This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter

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checkin polls for this................................
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Old 10-18-04, 03:43 PM   #24
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uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
 
Old 10-19-04, 03:18 PM   #25
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Upppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!1
 
Old 10-19-04, 08:42 PM   #26
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voting on this ish..........NOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 10-20-04, 05:35 AM   #27
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u win
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Old 10-20-04, 06:24 AM   #28
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Voted For: sabotage

sabotage got diz cuz hiz structure wuz way better den dat other guyz i culdnt even follow diz other guyz rhymez it wuz 2 fukked up
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Old 10-20-04, 06:54 AM   #29
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^2 wack votes.......................................
 
Old 10-20-04, 06:58 AM   #30
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yup^ lol......but 1 each so who cares i wanna get this battle done with anyway......UPPPPPPPINNNNNN
 
 


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