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11-07-04, 01:55 AM | #16 | ||||
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IP: 1C00 CCA1
Voted For: Mc_BaD_bOy
u both sucked shit!! work on ur flow mc_bad_boy and artik phrost, work on everything! it didn't even rhyme Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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11-07-04, 06:11 AM | #17 | |||||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: B7EB 8905
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11-11-04, 09:45 AM | #18 | |||
Banned
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IP: F2A1 41C4
Voted For: Artik Phrost
vote artik phrost... flow was better.. punches was better, creativeness was good all around tight ass verse... I hit precise within any confrontation, bitch you ain’t ready for me..face it!!.. put him in a cubed boxed jus to say I got MC squared lyke scientific equations!!..// that was good... Stay poundin this act, lyke reverse hugs, phrost’s punches’ll put a brace on his back!!.. so friendly, I’ll personally put his heart on tha tabletop and help MC counter attack!!.. decent ending... the other guy had no qouteables weak flow weak punches creativeness was weak just all around weak verse no comp what so ever.... 2.0 outta 10 |
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11-12-04, 12:15 PM | #19 | |||||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: B7EB 8905
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11-12-04, 10:57 PM | #20 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: 0267 71DD
Voted For: Artik Phrost
Mc_BaD_bOy: first bar was....not good pretty weak and non-effective any gun or pellet gun lines are one of the most played bars i've ever seen here. 2nd bar...was weak again not good because again it was played. 3rd and final was ummmmm............you said hoe too many times to make any sense its like you were typing in gibberish.overall: 1.5/10 the brutal truth is in my scores. Artik Phrost: 1st bar was ummmmm.....okay but a little played because on the math shit nah mean i tried one like that before only for a personal tho nice one....2nd= had nice vocabulary but thats about it played punch again. final bat was ummm....... decent best line to me at least but not that effective it was like you were telling a story instead of typing in a punch nah mean? overall: 6/10 vote: Artik Phrost
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11-23-04, 01:22 PM | #21 | |||||||
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IP: 256E B563
^^i dont see how it was inadequate.....what else yall want these people to say???...geez...prolly why people not voting......anyways UPPIN this
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11-23-04, 02:23 PM | #22 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Artik Phrost
Artik Gets My Vote On This Shit: hit precise within any confrontation, bitch you ain’t ready for me..face it!!.. put him in a cubed boxed jus to say I got MC squared lyke scientific equations!!..//1 8/10-I Liked That 2nd Line ya lines-wack, have this slut in check after I touch his cheek wit my palm-backs!!.. AP tha kind that, pierce swords through ya cornea and have MC killed on contact!!..//2 (contact lens) 8/10-Good Stay poundin this act, lyke reverse hugs, phrost’s punches’ll put a brace on his back!!.. so friendly, I’ll personally put his heart on tha tabletop and help MC counter attack!!..//3 (heart attack) 7/10-Was Ok Overall I Liked Your Structure and how your flow went. MC: this gal thinkin shes all good walkin like a gangster ill put her face in mud die bitch shot u down with a pelit gun n smak u over the head with wood 6/10-Violent yes but not a heavy Punch Artik Phrost aka proze u do it cuz ur poor n cant get it 4 free u useless scum bag u cant rap get outta here bitch dont touch me 5/10 Weak Blah hoe ur a hoe-lez-bo kissin ass going hay-hoe uvebeen in the hoe game since a long time ago 4/10 LOL woooow lmao at this line MC You Need Ta Practice Practic And Look at some of the battles that kat are winning ~1~
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11-23-04, 02:47 PM | #23 | |||||
Flyweight
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IP: 29FE 5E1A
Voted For: Artik Phrost
vote-Artik Phrost shit ya verse was way way way better tha mc bad boys nice flow nice worpplay an ya sruture nice overall better verse
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