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Old 12-01-04, 05:43 PM   #16
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This was feedback posted for Socrates

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Hoooooow The Fuuuucccccck Diiiiiiidddd Heee Gettt A Voooote?
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Old 12-05-04, 07:20 PM   #17
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Old 12-07-04, 11:14 AM   #18
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Who the fuck is this newb? d so shit ill be defeatin him simply
Really who has a chance against me when their merk list is empty?
decent

I'll merk this kid, and take his style and melt him in sec's
What kinda good MC can't even spell the word "respect"?
thats aight...
This is really a sad story kill this faggot till he cant even get up
Pussy, i've had better punches than you in my god damn set ups
WHAT?

How does it make you a man when you come at me wit a alias dude?
So I found out....whoever makes garbage ass sigs is probably you
kinda funny..

And I mean do I really have to point how whack you really are?
What type of dope textcee thinks 15 lines would make even bars?
haha now thats funny N a good one...

Kid's shakin in his boots and still pleading for me not to duck
You melt whack MC's?guess it's time for you to self-destruct
aight...

I'll grapple your spleen and then slowly rearrange you face
Where he lay's his hats his home....next to a tin can and guitar case!
it could of been a better ending but ok...

all around not a bad verse a few decent bars one or 2 i wasnt feeling but all around but bad 7.5/10


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Call Him Prometheus Coz I Fished Him Out So How You Keeping It Real??*
1st line good 2ed ok could of been better...

Wan' Play Socrates.........That's Good Nigka Coz I'm Playing Zeus........
A Myth For A Name........A Great Wonder....What Are You Obtuse????...
decent...

Your A Plain Simple Actor In My Verse.............The Main Character......
In The Case Of Battling Some One Like Me Fear Is Your Worst Factor..
i like the flow on this, preety good...

You Seek Attention With That Greek Name....What A Weak Name.....
I'm Relevant To Authentic Intelligence Coz I Wan' You Slain.......
nah really feeling this... but o.k

Theres An End To All Fairy Tails......And It's Right About Now...
I've Knock Your Tooth Out And Added To My Record A Knock Out...
could of been a better ending....


well u had a couple decent lines slightly better flow, but both of ya ending was preety weak..... none the less not a bad verse... 8.0/10
 
Old 12-07-04, 06:47 PM   #19
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You are a complete idiot. Upping for hmmmm maybe GOOD votes?
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Old 12-07-04, 07:46 PM   #20
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This was feedback posted for Socrates

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i'll up this for you guys
 
Old 12-07-04, 08:58 PM   #21
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Voted For: Socrates

Kid Your Another Mythical One...................Thinking Your Skill Is Real??
Call Him Prometheus Coz I Fished Him Out So How You Keeping It Real??*
OK start
Wan' Play Socrates.........That's Good Nigka Coz I'm Playing Zeus........
A Myth For A Name........A Great Wonder....What Are You Obtuse????...
haha nice one it was good
Your A Plain Simple Actor In My Verse.............The Main Character......
In The Case Of Battling Some One Like Me Fear Is Your Worst Factor..
no.. not good at all...flow is bad
You Seek Attention With That Greek Name....What A Weak Name.....
I'm Relevant To Authentic Intelligence Coz I Wan' You Slain.......
not thaT good
Theres An End To All Fairy Tails......And It's Right About Now...
I've Knock Your Tooth Out And Added To My Record A Knock Out...
STrongt closer nice punch

Who the fuck is this newb? d so shit ill be defeatin him simply
Really who has a chance against me when their merk list is empty?
ok start.. not that good
I'll merk this kid, and take his style and melt him in sec's
What kinda good MC can't even spell the word "respect"?
good line.. could been changed in parts
This is really a sad story kill this faggot till he cant even get up
Pussy, i've had better punches than you in my god damn set ups
i hate rhyme repititions...so not good
How does it make you a man when you come at me wit a alias dude?
So I found out....whoever makes garbage ass sigs is probably you
flow is bad...
And I mean do I really have to point how whack you really are?
What type of dope textcee thinks 15 lines would make even bars?
WTF... suck
Kid's shakin in his boots and still pleading for me not to duck
You melt whack MC's?guess it's time for you to self-destruct
HAHAHAH nice punch
I'll grapple your spleen and then slowly rearrange you face
Where he lay's his hats his home....next to a tin can and guitar case!
ok closer

damn this was so close....
socarate ddint come hard....torque had somme nice line

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Old 12-11-04, 06:22 PM   #22
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Old 12-15-04, 11:52 AM   #23
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Voted For: Socrates

ok i got to give this one to soc

He came harder in almost every catagory except the losing part so i guess

with no though Socrates even know ..:Torque:.. was NO CHALLANGE to him

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Old 12-15-04, 11:55 AM   #24
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hey can some one return the favor links in sigg
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Old 12-15-04, 12:29 PM   #25
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Voted For: Socrates

well....battle was kind of one sided soc got this...although his verse coulda withstood some more stronger and witty lines .but never theless it was enough to beat Torque...Tor..just basically fucked up his chances of winning by having a off flow verse with .no hard hitting punches ;/ nothing was matching too well.

vote-Soc.

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Old 12-21-04, 05:52 AM   #26
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Old 12-21-04, 08:19 PM   #27
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I'm giving this battle to Socrates...Soc had the better punches as well as personals wordplay, flow and even the rhyme scheme was better...i really don't feel a verse when people rhyme the same word two or three time it's not creative enuff...and the punches thrown by torque weren't all that great either like he just amde an attempt at wordplay personals and all the sort but if u elevate you can only get better..peaceezy

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Old 12-29-04, 01:35 PM   #28
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I THINK THAT SOCRETES TOOK THIS ONE-
SOCERETS I LIKED URE RHYME SCHEME...YOU HAD A GOOD FLOW...STRUCTRE WAS A LITTLE OFF BUT STILL GOOD...U HAD GOOD PERSONALS IN YOURE VERSE...PUNCHES HIT HARD AND FAST GOT RIGHT TO THE POINT...WORDPLAY WAS GOOD COULDVE BEEN BETTER BUT STIL GOOD...
6.5/10
BEST LNE---I'll merk this kid, and take his style and melt him in sec's
What kinda good MC can't even spell the word "respect"?
(NICE DISS)
TORQUE---YOURE VERSE WAS OKAY...YOUR STRUCTRE WAS A LITTLE OFF...PUNCHES DIDNT HIT AS HARD ASSOCRETES THOUGH BU TSTILL OKAY...HALF OF URE WORDS BALEY IF NOT DIDNT RHYME...FLOW WAS A LITTLE CHOPPY...
4/10
BEST LINE---Your A Plain Simple Actor In My Verse.............The Main Character......
In The Case Of Battling Some One Like Me Fear Is Your Worst Factor..
GOOD WORK TO BOTH OF YOU...
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