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Old 11-30-04, 06:38 PM   #16
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Old 11-30-04, 06:41 PM   #17
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Old 11-30-04, 11:49 PM   #18
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you didn't vote cuz ya don't got enough posts, up ya posts and vote again
 
Old 12-01-04, 06:27 AM   #19
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Voted For: headgames

structure= tie
punches= headgame
wordplay=neither
mettas=headgame

Thats the break-down man. Head games verse was more complex and versitille. His punches landed harder n eveything was better. You both need to elevate, but my advice for troop is elevate even more lol.

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Old 12-01-04, 01:40 PM   #20
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Old 12-01-04, 03:18 PM   #21
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hahahahahahahahahaha lmao, aight so it's gonna be 0-0?
 
Old 12-01-04, 08:41 PM   #22
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uppin this vote kids
 
Old 12-02-04, 08:57 PM   #23
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upping again peeps, vote
 
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Old 12-03-04, 03:00 AM   #25
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damn i knew i shouldnt of done this...Fl is so damn gay
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Old 12-03-04, 09:03 PM   #26
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Werd, sorry man........ lol, i'll get 5 wins one day
 
Old 12-05-04, 01:42 AM   #27
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u aint gettin no 5 wins...this battle
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Old 12-05-04, 01:51 AM   #28
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Voted For: *Troop*

easy win for troop

pretty easy explanation.....troop used more multis in his verse....his punches hit harder and had a couple metaphors in there.....1st bar was nice...hit had as hell.....2nd bar was decent....3rd bar was decent nice personal....4th bar was pretty nice....good job using a comparison

head....1st off your structure was completely fucked...it was hard as hell to read......you didnt use any multis....punches were decent....used a personal or 2 that were decent.....

overall troops verse was just nicer....he used more mutlis...it was more original....his personals were better....metaphors were better....and structure was 20 times better......no hate....just my opinion
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Old 12-05-04, 04:25 AM   #29
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Voted For: *Troop*

lmfao lmfao at headgames opening lol omg that was funny as fuck now the rap which was ok streched a lil punches and dises aint really hit the kicked out the group he was leading is a gansta ass diss ender was fuuny this fucking verse is hilarous as fuck but not dope cuz the puches were mad weak a 4/10
troop opener is played as fuck but a ok punch second bar was a decent personal also third bar was dope as fuck personal and punch ender was ok aint rhyme good decent punches and personals much better structure and vocab a 5/10
troop gets this with better punches and disses and a better put toghther verse but troops still a fag and his girls still ugly
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Old 12-05-04, 01:41 PM   #30
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vote: headgames hands down i thought he punches and verse was more original then troops and i thought troops verse was average with played punches but nice battle here a couple of stood out line and a couple played all together good battle but head-games got this one
 
 


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