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Old 12-20-04, 06:23 PM   #16
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This was feedback posted for Chaos

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Just checking polls
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Old 12-23-04, 10:22 AM   #17
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uppin for some fucking votes in here...~1~
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Old 12-24-04, 09:08 PM   #18
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Voted For: Chaos

This battle sucked!!

Chaos: Your verse was wack again man!! 2 many verses are wack that i've read of yours!! lol.. j/p.. but yea, your structure was very bad, especially your flow man!! But there we're 2 bars from your verse i really liked..

I'll Blow Ya Brains-Out...And Lie Them Down At Ya Stadium!...
Me Losing This Match-Is Like USA Losing Against The Canadians!!.....
Lmao good one

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You Style's Cheap-Your Not Elevating This Way!!.....
Like Cheap Mom's On Christmas Day-You Got Ya Style Off Ebay!!!.....

lol, very original!!

Rising Sun: Dude! It seemed like you mostly worked on multi's then actually dissing him??Your multi's we're alrite, but anyone can do that, it's the punch you really gotta work on, you should also work on some metaphors which I really recommend you do!! Your best line is:

As I stomp-this-fag with more punches than a rocky-match
“Tuck you away” cause you “stink” like big league hockey-bags

and that bar was still kinda wack, due to hockey bags?? It's like trying to dis on someone else sayin you smell like gym socks!! Really old, but good job and much props on the multi's..

Vote: Chaos
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Old 12-24-04, 09:13 PM   #19
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^lol...thanks......uppin for more votes.....
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Old 12-25-04, 01:35 AM   #20
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Voted For: Chaos

Chaos:

Its Funny How This Nigga Only Comes Out At Day-Cuz He Scared To Come Out At Dark.....
This Kid Got More Skips & Scratches On His Demo-Than His Damn Avatar!!....
^^maybe the dopest bar in this battle good way to start 9/10
Look At You-Your Empty-No Crew In Ya Signature!!.....
This Kid Is So Wack-He Had To Make His Own Fake Link-Cuz No One Bother To Make Him A Graphical Signature!!.....
^^wack + stretched 4/10
I'll Blow Ya Brains-Out...And Lie Them Down At Ya Stadium!...
Me Losing This Match-Is Like USA Losing Against The Canadians!!.....
^^dope bar lmao and true 9/10
I'll Pull Your Insides-Out Untill I See Your Heart Pumping!!....
Then Inject Your Blood Steam-With Air-Then Inject Water In Ya Throat-And Laugh As I See You Choking.....
^^decent but stretched 5/10
You Style's Cheap-Your Not Elevating This Way!!.....
Like Cheap Mom's On Christmas Day-You Got Ya Style Off Ebay!!!.....
^^lmao good close 8/10

overall : 35/50 (70%)

Rising Sun:

Make your life tragic like Magic’s as you engage-with-AIDS
Your dream’s like MJ's jump shot cause they fade-away and I’ll save-the-day
^^first line good, second line filler 4/10
As I stomp-this-fag with more punches than a rocky-match
“Tuck you away” cause you “stink” like big league hockey-bags
^^dope ass bar 9/10
Much like cocky-blacks, a relationship with your girl man, I “will-forbid”
Cause I’ll put “Siemen” across-her-shirt…
Like she play for Real-Madrid
^^ehh decent meta wasnt feelin this 3/10
This whack hybrid just acts-black when he jack-plaques from whack-cats
But you can’t combat on flat-tracks
So I’ll teach-you-to-rap and speaking-of-facts the demon-is-back
^^stretched as fuck and kinda weak decent multies 4/10
To holla-front, you better off being a baler-son, this scholar-stunned
Spitting 90 degrees, your CD will be crushed into debris
Even if I’m skipping-a-beat, I’ll be ripping-this-Gee
Have you die in your paralysis like you Christopher-Reeves
^^decent wordplay played concepts decent punnches 5/10
Watch this emcee get around-your-hounds
Make your DOGS jump…
As I pound-the-ground with thunder-sounds made when I gun-the-rounds
I’ll bury you while you alive so you can listen to what’s under-ground
^^wack closer played bars been used 1 million times multies were decent but wack fucking closer 3/10

overall : 28/60 (47%)

vote: chaos

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Old 12-25-04, 08:41 AM   #21
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^thanks uppin for more votes up in here.....~1~
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Old 12-25-04, 09:51 AM   #22
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Voted For: Chaos

Rising sun:
You lacked the personals... flow was ok... structure was good... but you needed personals.. ya punches were pretty on and off.. metaphors eh..

Chaos: Personals won you this battle.. it was basically a verse of personals.. Flow was a little wierd.. but aight.. structure was messed clean that up.
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