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Old 12-13-04, 06:06 PM   #16
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Returned favors are great these days. (In other words take a fuckin' hint haha.)
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Old 12-13-04, 06:17 PM   #17
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This was feedback posted for ..Lyrical..

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This dude thinks he's hard but shit it don't matter
Only 6 lines away now till his dreams shatter
I'm flattered you wanna battle ME but this one sided
You bite rhymes my dicks out come bite it
Get ya buddy his dick's out ride it that's the only way you'll win
Ya rhymes like paper and mine full of whirls n winds
Get the girls and friends so they can see ya get ya ass kicked
Get off crack kid you can't rap n skill is what you lackin
^^^^^^^^^^^^ FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP....PUNCHES WERE PLAYED OUT....ELEVATE ON PUNCHES...AND USE PERSONALS....EITHER WAY.....THIS WAS NOT AN GOOD VERSE




Shut the fuck up with your wack vocab…you lack dope lines
U Milk your flow for what it's worth…like you got lactose rhymes
Split Your Personality Apart…So Your Bars Aren’t From Different Points of View
This Day You'll Rue…Fearing The Mail…Because the Pain I’m Delivering You
Ruff Is Never Ahead…Nor Behind…Her Direction Is Wrong
Another Win Under My Belt…And That’s Where Ruff Belongs
Yep Its True, Ruff Is Addicted 2 Homo Ass…Let Me Help Kick Ya Habit
Ya Only Dropped Ill When I Bit Ya Check In…But Honestly…That’s It
^^^^^^^^^^^ FIX YOUR STRUTURE AND PLS DONT PUT YOUR VERSE IN BOLD FAM....U HAD SOME PUNCHES...GOOD FLOW....


OVERALL= THIS WAS AN ONE-SIDED BATTLE RUFFRIDAH CAME PLAYED WITH HER PUNCHES...FLOW WAS A LIL CHOPPED UP BUT THE PUNCHES WERE PLAYED OUT ELEVATE RUFF

LYRICAL HE HAD SOME PUNCHES GOOD FLOW...PUNCHES WERE THE THINGS THAT BEAT RUFF IN THIS BATTLE

SO I HAVE TO GIVE THIS TO RUFF FOR HARDER PUNCHES

PEACE


O DAYUM THIS IS AN FEEDBACK SRRY I CANT VOTE
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Old 12-18-04, 07:41 PM   #18
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Uppin This...
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Old 12-20-04, 10:00 AM   #19
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Old 12-20-04, 01:20 PM   #20
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Ryan.. I dont wnna vote against you dude... lol..... But I am gonna hafta give it to Lyrical...

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Old 12-20-04, 08:52 PM   #21
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Shut the fuck up with your wack vocab…you lack dope lines
U Milk your flow for what it's worth…like you got lactose rhymes
Damn Thats A Ko Rite Thea....


Split Your Personality Apart…So Your Bars Aren’t From Different Points of View
This Day You'll Rue…Fearing The Mail…Because the Pain I’m Delivering You
Good Punches And Nice Metas..

Ruff Is Never Ahead…Nor Behind…Her Direction Is Wrong
Another Win Under My Belt…And That’s Where Ruff Belongs
Shit Wass Off Tha Meter I Like That..

Yep Its True, Ruff Is Addicted 2 Homo Ass…Let Me Help Kick Ya Habit
Ya Only Dropped Ill When I Bit Ya Check In…But Honestly…That’s It
Fuckin Koed Hommie Mad Wicked Yo He Had Vokab Punches And Personals Damn Yo *Sends Ruff Home Ashamed* HaHa
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Old 12-24-04, 09:13 PM   #22
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Old 12-25-04, 02:18 PM   #23
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Old 12-26-04, 07:43 PM   #24
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Old 12-31-04, 12:53 PM   #25
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Old 01-01-05, 02:23 PM   #26
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

damn lyrical ripped this shit.. fucking dope ass punches.. real original too... pretty good flow.. decent structure.. good personals... this is one of the best drops i seen from u.. good job B....keep it up..
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Old 01-01-05, 05:07 PM   #27
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thankz mayn...uppin.
 
Old 01-01-05, 05:22 PM   #28
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

lyrical.......
Shut the fuck up with your wack vocab…you lack dope lines
U Milk your flow for what it's worth…like you got lactose rhymes
lol nice opener....good personal in 1st line...nice wordplay

Split Your Personality Apart…So Your Bars Aren’t From Different Points of View
This Day You'll Rue…Fearing The Mail…Because the Pain I’m Delivering You
decent...hit good.....good punch

Ruff Is Never Ahead…Nor Behind…Her Direction Is Wrong
Another Win Under My Belt…And That’s Where Ruff Belongs
ok...prolly your worst bar....but still hit good

Yep Its True, Ruff Is Addicted 2 Homo Ass…Let Me Help Kick Ya Habit
Ya Only Dropped Ill When I Bit Ya Check In…But Honestly…That’s It
lol nice closer....made me laugh....


ruffridah.......................
This dude thinks he's hard but shit it don't matter
Only 6 lines away now till his dreams shatter
hmm too simple...hit ok....but not that great of an opener

I'm flattered you wanna battle ME but this one sided
You bite rhymes my dicks out come bite it
not feelin this....

Get ya buddy his dick's out ride it that's the only way you'll win
Ya rhymes like paper and mine full of whirls n winds
decent...didnt like the first line

Get the girls and friends so they can see ya get ya ass kicked
Get off crack kid you can't rap n skill is what you lackin
not a good closer...it really didnt hit well.....too simple


basically i voted for lyrical because his verse was just on another level.....punches hit harder...more personals...the verse was just better....need i explain more?

rtf lyrical...links in sig...thanks
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