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can you say....xcell=gay....dq'in votes n shit...whats up man....that shit was broken down.........w/e

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Voted For: Ill.Logic

ILL TOOK THIS ONE CAUSE XCELL CAME WAY TO SIMPLE FOR THIS ONE...
XCELL-ur verse lacked skill. ur punches were there, but u just used em wrong, and worded em wrong. ur structure fell off near tha midle to tha end, so that took away points. and ur rhyming were coo, but a lil simple...practice more, learn how to become more creative, then elevate (no hate)
ill.logic-ur verse wasnt all that great either. u had some nice punches in there, and some nice structure, but it also lacked skill. u just came out tha better person in this battle, but i still think u should practice more on some harder punches, then elevate.tha last bar was tha best. and i dont really think u should haf'to explain for every bar, thats unneccesary. but overall, u came out on top in this one...
overall-you both need to work on skill and creativity. ill.logic. took this one with harder punches and better wordplay.


plz, if u havent already(ill.logic) return a vote on tha battle in sig...


my bad xcell, but i had to do it honest, just practice a lil more...




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Voted For: Ill.Logic

Vote: ill logic

Xcell:
WTF was up wit ur structure homie.................fix that, dont use played lines 2 do wid k-mart, its jus uncreative, some of ur attempted metaphors were poor, u sacrificed ur structure for a multi flow and it werent even hard hittin and it didnt have a propa punch in it.....work on gettin more creative punches into ur verse

Ill Logic:
Shouldnt Mess Wit A Pro,Cuz I Was Created Ta Kill Hoes,
Already Dissin Yaself,U A Bitch,Even Your Location Says So,
ok, sort of a gd personal, not that hardhittin but gd - 7/10
I Burn-Foes,Punches-Is-Small, U Already Beginnin Ta-Stall,
So Watch Me Put An End To His "Flows" Like I Was A Waterfall,
nice metaphor, gd worplay n concept, nice overall - 7.5/10
Destroy-Pubs, You Better Beware What I Do To This Scrub,
Cuz I'll "Rip His Bars Apart" Like I Was Tearing "Night-Clubs",
ok closer, solid, not really a punch but decent - 7/10

RTF - links in sig

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Voted For: Ill.Logic

fuk that xcelll elevate.........yo ill logik its ur man x ceed u had beef wit..........no we kool aiight yo vote has 2 go 2 logik he had good punches and dope structure some good personals wack word play but hay.................... y oxcell you had awesome wordplay best line wuz see... i sell more units then halo
u couldnt b more of an ass if u was j.lo
ure worthless like a mexicans last paso
i own u know like a habbit im done with this
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol gud but logik owned ur ass dawg
So Watch Me Put An End To His "Flows" Like I Was A Waterfall,
Destroy-Pubs, You Better Beware What I Do To This Scrub,
Cuz I'll "Rip His Bars Apart" Like I Was Tearing "Night-Clubs",

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^gud shit sounds like sum old skool shit --------- gud keep it up........yo holla bak wit a vote 4 the battle against necro pyronix............. return the favour

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ya xceed....we cool....not bcuz of this vote but wut happen before...anywayz

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Voted For: Ill.Logic

rite o.k battle here....

but ILL took this one

pretty dope verse dawg with nice flow, structure and most of all some hard hitting punches, liked the closer, original....

other kid was alrite but can still elevate alot just found it abit boring, not much originality but flow n structure was alrite....

pz

Could ya plz hit this up wiv an honest vote, bein mad slept on, thanx...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=169625

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