aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
lol nice!

^ rotflmmfao @ that, you're kidding right?

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stop sleepin on this shit.... fuck i hate EFL.. no one votes

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

this seemed like a very lopsided battle lol
Flow: both
style: both
opener no one
closer pop
punches wicked (i saw one)
personals wicked
rhyme scheme wicked
vocab wicked

winner wicked

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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

ehhh not too hot battle but i think wicked clown took this battle. both verses seemed kinda forced n werent to much fun to read. but wicked had a better flow n punches hit harder in my opinion. both work on throwin some multies in there to make ur verses more interesting.
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Voted For: Pop Lotty

wicked~some of ya lines were good, but i wasnt feeling the mcdonalds lines,lol, your lines seemed to be too long as well, like you were lookin for more filler, this verse wasnt bad, but nothing really stuck out and made me say wow, but nonethe less good job..keep at it, i felt this wasnt strong enough for the win..1
pop lotty~your verse was short, but to the point, you had some personals that are verifiable, liked the cocaine line,and the declaration of independence lines about his long verses, good, creative punches, i thought your opener could have been better, but you made up for it with the ending 2 bars, it got better as i read on, nice job...1

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ok this kid didnt even rhyme... how in the hell does cocaine rhyme with straight fluidmoon? you said u liked that line but it made no sence... bunch of fuckin dick ride votes

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

wow wicked nice drop cuz it wsa hot snoooop lol but anywho I liked ur's better becuase I felt the flow and I felt the imagry and the hits where harder vocab was good opener-closure was iight and ur strucutre was good flow was iight and rhyming was excellent. so hey return the fav and hit up on my links peace

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