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Old 02-10-05, 05:52 PM   #16
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Old 02-10-05, 05:56 PM   #17
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^lol, probably pm'd his ass or sumthin, cuz your lines were more streched than mine, only one of my lines was much longer than the otherz, two of your lines were longer than the otherz, but o well.............................................. .
 
Old 02-10-05, 09:54 PM   #18
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This was feedback posted for Capitol

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hmmmmmmm close battle here.


Checking polls


G-drop parasite and capitol.
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Old 02-10-05, 10:13 PM   #19
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Voted For: Capitol

voted for capitol

Easy Vote

Capitol- damn good verse fam, I felt it man
Ya punches was hard n strong , striat to his face
Flow was Nice very nice I could actually stay wit it
Multies- Good for the ones I saw
Structure- Ight structure fam (not the best) (not the worst)
Personals- Didnt see any sorry

Para the only thing I seen u had goinf for you was the multies man
Ya punches well i didnt hardly see any that were worth looking at fam ya gotta make sure people no ur dissin him man
Personals nah didnt see any fam sorry
structure- a lil stretched out man shorten em

Also:
Para I seen u repeat a few phrases thas not what u want to do fam

REPEATS:
ca-pi-tol? ill blast-this-fool, then laugh-at-you, cuz you need to stop RAP-PING-dude
leave you cracked-in-two, STOP RAPPING, stick wit sleeping, eating, and crapp-ing-poop

ya said stop rapping within 8 words of each other dont repeat fam

Breakdown:

Punches: Cap
Flow- Cap
Structure- Cap
Multies- Para
Wordplay- Cap
Personals- Neither

Good vote return the fava Fams
Dont hate vote me for given honest votes plz
 
Old 02-10-05, 10:44 PM   #20
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This was feedback posted for Capitol

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checkin the pollz..............................looks like a good battle


will be a close one ya'll
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Old 02-11-05, 04:32 PM   #21
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Old 02-11-05, 06:10 PM   #22
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Old 02-11-05, 09:12 PM   #23
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Voted For: Capitol

v/ cap
yo cap takes it here jus on about every level....
first off, the flow was much better...
death or parasite or w/e, i jus couldnt stay wit you man, it seemed like all of your lines were stretched....jus didnt help you out at all (some of the kind of shit that would probably be a lot better audio wise)...
punches cap takes dis with ease really.....
he kept em going through out the entire battle....death had em through most but you gotta get em all the way through....
structures not really a big deal, but both of yours were fine...
punches is what wins battles man....Cap had more of em,, i liked em better too....
but flow can really mess shit up if it doesnt work out....
pretty good for the most part from both of you though...
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Old 02-11-05, 10:54 PM   #24
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Old 02-12-05, 12:14 AM   #25
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Voted For: Capitol

flow=tied
meta4=cap
punches=cap
multie=death


both verse were decent but death i really aint see no punches, you should come alot more harder. you had mass multies bro, enter the multi league and battle with punches

cap had some different punches but maybe i aint read them right but you barley made it

vote=cap
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Old 02-12-05, 02:41 AM   #26
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Voted For: Capitol

Opener - Capitol, both were weak tho.
Closer - Capitol, although weak...Deaths was WACK!
Punches - Capitol, funny ass punches.
Personals - Tie, bpth used each others names nicely.
Metas - Tie, both had dope metas.
Multies - Capitol, and Death...using-dashes-on-words-arent-multies.
Structure - Both were bad...Deaths were worse...kid you made your text smaller and it still didnt all fit on one line in places.
Vocab - Capitol, nothing special about Deaths
Creativness - Neither, blahhh.

[b]As you can see above, Capitol took this one easy. Death, your lines were so fucking extended. Because of that you had no flow and it was more like a paragraph instead of a line. Capitol, you actually had some funny lines and nice wordplay. One more thing Death...like I said, its not considered a multi just because of your dashes you used. Stop trying so hard...kick back and just let it flow...I wanna see both of you elevate in your next battles...no hatin, just an hounest vote...payce.
 
 


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