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03-10-05, 09:52 PM | #16 | |||||
Praise The King, Peasants
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IP: 89CF 84F8
Voted For: A_M_H
A_M_H got this one by far.. better punches and wordplay.. nothing special but it was more than enough to win. Affinity, wasnt feelin ya punches really, no wordplay.. keep doin ur thing tho. RETURN THA FAVOUR IN MY SIG! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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03-10-05, 11:51 PM | #17 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
fo sho that'z more like it i appreciate ur vote j-money u noticed that real verse from a watered down verse from aff ight
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03-10-05, 11:52 PM | #18 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
still uppin...uppin...uppin this 4 more votes c'mon people y'all know u really won this battle
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03-11-05, 12:15 AM | #19 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Affinity
I wasnt feeling A_M_H's spit, affinity had me laughing a bit Flow-Affinity gets it, amh u should cut down on your lines punches-Affiniity, specially the last one was pretty good about the thuder... everythingn for me foes to affinity Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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03-11-05, 08:51 AM | #20 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks alot, i didnt think i would get newbs voting for me but thanks alot i guess making my punces funny get cats laughing thanks uppin for 2 more votes
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03-12-05, 08:51 AM | #21 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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This was feedback posted for A_M_H
IP: B1A5 868C
checkin polls..........
i'ma be suprized if your not at least equal with the votes
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03-12-05, 03:07 PM | #22 | |||
This is my first post!
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This was feedback posted for Affinity
IP: 9E2F CDE8
Checking the polls out here.......................
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03-14-05, 04:33 PM | #23 | |||||||
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IP: 7F4E CC2E
Voted For: Affinity
Allright... Affinity... Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south Not really feeling this line...5/10 I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery not to shabby...coulda been worded better 6/10 Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show .......weak, could have been better...5/10 every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks? this first line of this punch was deece...but you forced the rhyme of the last line...cause it wasn't to hard...7/10 Overal: 23/50 A_M_H... U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping Way to fuckin' played...and christmas was ages ago...4/10 divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines didn't flow but was a good punch...6/10 having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool .........wack....terrible punch...3/10 open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants" .....eh not bad...6/10 Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack .........no...terrible line......3/10 this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"** put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy eh.....wasn't to bad....6/10 Overal: 28/60 This was kind of a wack battle. Both should elevate. Vote: Affinity |
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03-14-05, 04:34 PM | #24 | |||||||
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IP: 7F4E CC2E
^ The math looks wrong there because Affinitys verse is supposed to be out of 40 not 50. My vote still stands the way it is.
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03-14-05, 05:09 PM | #25 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for Affinity
IP: 3CAE 6243
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03-14-05, 07:59 PM | #26 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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This was feedback posted for Affinity
IP: AB23 98FF
ummm.... both kinda sucked so im just gonna leave feedback....affinity would get my vote.... onyl cause AMH put too many quotations and dashes and shit... which made it even more gay... no hate
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03-15-05, 12:18 AM | #27 | ||||
Non-Convicted Rapist
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IP: 9E0A BAC8
Voted For: A_M_H
A_M_H - you had some nice punches in there...dope personals...i liked the one bout toy story...u had nice use of a lot of multies..only thing u should work on is ur structure..kinda jumps around a lot Affinity - you had really good flow and some decent punches, but not really any personals that i could see...and the main problem i had was that it was all just too simple...u should spice ur stuff up a bit, nuthin really stuck out, and u shoulda used some multies v/ A_M_H Return The Favor...Link In My Sig
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03-15-05, 12:29 AM | #28 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0CB8 A04E
^your wack i had my opener a personal, fuckin idiot and he didnt eather, learn rap before i merk you....uppin
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03-15-05, 10:52 AM | #29 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
Voted For: Affinity
ok how the fuck is AMH losing..affinity...had a much better verse........wat da fuck... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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03-17-05, 09:53 AM | #30 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Voted For: A_M_H
Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south Umm... Ok Personal... Hella Simple Though... I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery First Line Was Blah... Second Doesn't Punch... Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show Rainbow = Gay... Second Line Didn't Punch... every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks? Lego Blocks CONNECT... And No... It's Lightning That Shocks Mother Fucker... Plus It's Self Hype So It's Irrelevant Anyway... Overall - Pretty Weak... Didn't Really Throw Any Punches... Simplistic Verse... Hardly Any Multies Or Inside Rhyming... 2.5/10... U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping Played... And Self Hype... divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines Cool... Nice Wordplay... having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool LoL... Funny, But What Does Chlorine Have To Do With Anything..? open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants" Aight... Cool Wordplay... Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack Umm... No... this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"** put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy Irrelevant... Overall - This Waz Aight... Some Shyt Was Irrelevant And Didn't Make Sense, But You Had Wordplay And Multies... And Some Ok Punches... 6.5/10 Vote - A_M_H... Due To A More Complex Verse... Complex Rhyme Scheme... Not To Mention Wordplay And He Through Some Punches... Nameplays... |
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