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Old 03-10-05, 09:52 PM   #16
J-Money
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Voted For: A_M_H

A_M_H got this one by far.. better punches and wordplay.. nothing special but it was more than enough to win.
Affinity, wasnt feelin ya punches really, no wordplay.. keep doin ur thing tho. RETURN THA FAVOUR IN MY SIG!

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Old 03-10-05, 11:51 PM   #17
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fo sho that'z more like it i appreciate ur vote j-money u noticed that real verse from a watered down verse from aff ight
 
Old 03-10-05, 11:52 PM   #18
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still uppin...uppin...uppin this 4 more votes c'mon people y'all know u really won this battle
 
Old 03-11-05, 12:15 AM   #19
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Voted For: Affinity

I wasnt feeling A_M_H's spit, affinity had me laughing a bit

Flow-Affinity gets it, amh u should cut down on your lines

punches-Affiniity, specially the last one was pretty good about the thuder...


everythingn for me foes to affinity

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Old 03-11-05, 08:51 AM   #20
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thanks alot, i didnt think i would get newbs voting for me but thanks alot i guess making my punces funny get cats laughing thanks uppin for 2 more votes
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Old 03-12-05, 08:51 AM   #21
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checkin polls..........
i'ma be suprized if your not at least equal with the votes
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Old 03-12-05, 03:07 PM   #22
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This was feedback posted for Affinity

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Checking the polls out here.......................
 
Old 03-14-05, 04:33 PM   #23
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Allright...

Affinity...

Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth
U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south
Not really feeling this line...5/10
I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey
U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery
not to shabby...coulda been worded better 6/10
Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow
Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show
.......weak, could have been better...5/10
every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks
my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks?
this first line of this punch was deece...but you forced the rhyme of the last line...cause it wasn't to hard...7/10

Overal: 23/50

A_M_H...

U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening
this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping
Way to fuckin' played...and christmas was ages ago...4/10
divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line
slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines
didn't flow but was a good punch...6/10
having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool
ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool
.........wack....terrible punch...3/10
open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot
watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants"
.....eh not bad...6/10
Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back
i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack
.........no...terrible line......3/10
this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"**
put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy
eh.....wasn't to bad....6/10

Overal: 28/60

This was kind of a wack battle. Both should elevate.

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Old 03-14-05, 04:34 PM   #24
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^ The math looks wrong there because Affinitys verse is supposed to be out of 40 not 50. My vote still stands the way it is.
 
Old 03-14-05, 05:09 PM   #25
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Old 03-14-05, 07:59 PM   #26
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ummm.... both kinda sucked so im just gonna leave feedback....affinity would get my vote.... onyl cause AMH put too many quotations and dashes and shit... which made it even more gay... no hate
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Old 03-15-05, 12:18 AM   #27
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Voted For: A_M_H

A_M_H - you had some nice punches in there...dope personals...i liked the one bout toy story...u had nice use of a lot of multies..only thing u should work on is ur structure..kinda jumps around a lot

Affinity - you had really good flow and some decent punches, but not really any personals that i could see...and the main problem i had was that it was all just too simple...u should spice ur stuff up a bit, nuthin really stuck out, and u shoulda used some multies

v/ A_M_H

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Old 03-15-05, 12:29 AM   #28
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^your wack i had my opener a personal, fuckin idiot and he didnt eather, learn rap before i merk you....uppin
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Old 03-15-05, 10:52 AM   #29
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Voted For: Affinity

ok how the fuck is AMH losing..affinity...had a much better verse........wat da fuck...

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Old 03-17-05, 09:53 AM   #30
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Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth
U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south

Umm... Ok Personal... Hella Simple Though...

I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey
U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery

First Line Was Blah... Second Doesn't Punch...

Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow
Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show

Rainbow = Gay... Second Line Didn't Punch...

every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks
my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks?

Lego Blocks CONNECT... And No... It's Lightning That Shocks Mother Fucker... Plus It's Self Hype So It's Irrelevant Anyway...

Overall - Pretty Weak... Didn't Really Throw Any Punches... Simplistic Verse... Hardly Any Multies Or Inside Rhyming... 2.5/10...

U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening
this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping

Played... And Self Hype...

divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line
slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines

Cool... Nice Wordplay...

having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool
ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool

LoL... Funny, But What Does Chlorine Have To Do With Anything..?

open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot
watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants"

Aight... Cool Wordplay...

Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back
i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack

Umm... No...

this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"**
put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy

Irrelevant...

Overall - This Waz Aight... Some Shyt Was Irrelevant And Didn't Make Sense, But You Had Wordplay And Multies... And Some Ok Punches... 6.5/10

Vote - A_M_H... Due To A More Complex Verse... Complex Rhyme Scheme... Not To Mention Wordplay And He Through Some Punches... Nameplays...
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