RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 03-11-05, 07:50 PM   #16
metaman
Flyweight
 
metaman's Avatar
 
Posts: 137
Joined: Feb 2005
From: Detroit
Status: Offline
IP: 5F09 8F0A

Voted For: Prophysics

this was an alright battle... heres how i saw it:

flow: this goes to pro... i was feelin it a bit more than dex's, who's structure was a bit confusing, especially towards the end

wordplay: dex gets this... barely

personals: pro gets this, and his personals are what saved his punches, i thought... not enough wordplay, but still a hard hitting verse from pro

pro had a good flow, hard hitting punches, and pretty good personals, and he just overwhelmed dex this time... keep elevatin tho, no hate

return the favor links in sig

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
 
Old 03-12-05, 03:03 AM   #17
Prophysics
Light Weight
 
Posts: 389
Joined: Mar 2005
Status: Offline
IP: 56BF 8B50

uuuuuuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn n
 
Old 03-12-05, 11:39 PM   #18
ethiks
been dope.
 
Posts: 89
Joined: Feb 2005
From: S.D.
Status: Offline
IP: 5895 95C3

Voted For: Prophysics

chose winners verse:

dex you aint shit........i mean you already admit that your a biter
took U over 2 days to acept, 10 minutes to drop, probably a prewriter
aight opener....should always open strong.
this kids close to ILL, well atleast hes ILLiterate, aint that surprising
i mean check his siggy, he cant spell.....WTF is lyrically terrorisng
good personal....using peoples sig's is gettin old though.
but inspite of your looses,this battle is getten hung up like crosses
becuase im so sick,when you try to bite my rhymes i make you nauseous
nice punch....good hit.
so be cautous, before i have to beat you into a textaul submission
your personals are probably fake,so all your disses are abvously missin
basic punch....could of came harder.
so every time your punches try to hit i defend with writers block
blacklist? your wack kid, thats why all your dick riders stopped
good closer....always open and close strong.

[FONT=Tahoma]v/pro


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181383
return tha favor^^^
 
Old 03-13-05, 02:34 AM   #19
Prophysics
Light Weight
 
Posts: 389
Joined: Mar 2005
Status: Offline
IP: 1A28 C5D0

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnn
 
Old 03-13-05, 08:48 PM   #20
Prophysics
Light Weight
 
Posts: 389
Joined: Mar 2005
Status: Offline
IP: 04CC 98A8

uuuppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn nnnn
 
Old 03-14-05, 01:43 AM   #21
Prophysics
Light Weight
 
Posts: 389
Joined: Mar 2005
Status: Offline
IP: D9A8 25F6

uuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 03-14-05, 03:05 PM   #22
Untraceable
..Rv Sucks..
 
Untraceable's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,433
Joined: Dec 2004
From: p-ville
Status: Offline
Text Record: 6-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 2-1
This was feedback posted for Dex

IP: 408D D2A2

this was a really close battle......honestly i cant decide who won......you both cam strong in all catagories......dex had wittier punches but proph had better personals......you both had multi's you both had vocab, you both had humor and both had goor structure.......dex had a lil batter structure but proph had a lil better vocab........proph i doubt u did a keystyle.....and woh doesnt prewrite......not everyone keystyles verses......so yeah.......this was to close to call for me......but w/e good luck the both of you........
__________________





Send a message via AIM to Untraceable Send a message via Yahoo to Untraceable  
Old 03-14-05, 04:35 PM   #23
headgames
Banned: Cheating
 
Posts: 73
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
This was feedback posted for Prophysics

IP: 3CAE 6243

dont step kid cuz your fucking wack.......................
 
Old 03-14-05, 11:52 PM   #24
Prophysics
Light Weight
 
Posts: 389
Joined: Mar 2005
Status: Offline
IP: E347 CFD0

LOO, i dont care if you believe me< LOL whats funny is that this was a keystyyle and you guys think it wasnt, which says that my keystyles are as dope as someones prewrittens
LOOL

upppiiinnn
 
Old 03-15-05, 03:16 AM   #25
High-Dro
Non-Convicted Rapist
 
High-Dro's Avatar
 
Posts: 4,367
Joined: Jun 2004
From: Bridgewater, Nova Scotia, Canada
Status: Offline
IP: 9E0A BAC8

Voted For: Dex

Dex - good flow, u had some decent punches in there, and a personal or two...threw in a bit of vocab for good measure..ur personals and punches coulda hit a bit harder..but nice job

Prophysics - you started off pretty good with a good personal, but unfortunately it went downhill from there..ur punches were ok, and so were your personals..ur flow was good tho...but most of the verse was just the same, no hate, but it bored me...try to have more substance to battles and you'll improve

V/ dex

Return The Favor...Link In My Sig

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
__________________

Send a message via AIM to High-Dro Send a message via MSN to High-Dro  
Old 03-15-05, 03:45 AM   #26
BiZzO
Ka.Nek.ShuN
 
BiZzO's Avatar
 
Posts: 84
Joined: Nov 2004
From: .::Aus::.
Status: Offline
Text Record: 3-1
This was feedback posted for Dex

IP: 7F23 8EDF

yo im just checkin the polez... but i woulda voted for dex his verse was alot more complex...
 
Old 03-15-05, 08:21 AM   #27
Dex
Gods Of War! -yeah im one
 
Dex's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,453
Joined: Oct 2004
From: UK
Status: Offline
Text Record: 20-13
IP: CD98 49E3

uppin mother hubbards.......................................... ..........................
__________________




Send a message via AIM to Dex Send a message via MSN to Dex  
Old 03-16-05, 02:29 AM   #28
Prophysics
Light Weight
 
Posts: 389
Joined: Mar 2005
Status: Offline
IP: EBE7 EFAE

uuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiimmmmmmmmmmggggg ggggg
 
Old 03-16-05, 02:59 PM   #29
Prophysics
Light Weight
 
Posts: 389
Joined: Mar 2005
Status: Offline
IP: 4F9C E7C6

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNN
 
Old 03-16-05, 06:30 PM   #30
Wet Willy
.::Outside The Circle::.
 
Posts: 58
Joined: Dec 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 4-0
IP: E1D7 D0FC

Voted For: Dex

Dex definitely got this battle.. i have seen alot of improvement.. i mean ur still pretty ack but ur getting alot better.. u actually had some punches in ur verse.. one attempt at weak wordplay with the bit line... but u definitely came harder then Prophysics.. you both had nice flow, and nice structure, no personals from either dex just gets it with slightly harder weak punches.. prophysics u need to learn the basic concept of a punch before u can begin batttling nuff said Dex wins...
__________________
Send a message via AIM to Wet Willy  
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:18 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.