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Voted For: Kesse
Wow, nice verse Kesse. I didn't know you could drop like this. You have a style a lot like anxiety's. Which is good considering anxiety won the last tourn. Kesse: Structure is good, flow is on track, fell off sometimes, but nothing that big. Your vocab felt kinda forced in some places, like that word didn't belong, but it was aight. Your twist at the end wasn't completely original, but was good none the less. Overall, I think that your story line won this. Your imagery wasn't that good, but it was good enough. Era: Your verse was aight, but I can tell that you rushed. Your structure is fine, your flow was pretty good. Didn't fall off at all, almost. Imagery was aight, same with vocab. Your twist was the best part, but that wasn't enough to win this battle. v/Kesse
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teehee...yeah, thanks.....the first 6 bars, maybe, i wrote all good and intense, but then i ran outta ideas..........so i think it weakened in the end............i dont really think of this as beating you flow, since you were mixed up on the time limits......i just take it as a uplifting experience.......word
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