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Old 04-10-05, 11:55 AM   #16
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Voted For: MaD_KnighT

MaD_KnighT

Cumin into da ring wi me is like takin a lethal dose…
Cuz u shudn’t hav even cum 2 battle with onli 25 posts…..
^okay opener

To cum 2 RV n try battle,u must b 1 real darin-bitch….
Wat a shame, wen u started u wer doomed lik P.Charles marriages*..
^hehe, coo coo

Ur da type of bitch dat see’s a verse den runs away…….
Why put shit about wer u from,peeps don’t care anyway…
^good one

Answer this?RV Legend* ha bitch ur just self-proclaimed….
My verse is nearly over,u’ve just been named n shamed…
^decent bar

Ur da next bitch on –bODy CoUnT’s- list,tlkin about da 9/11 tragedy*…..
Cuz wen u spit shit like dat,u goin 2 jus get killed like John F. Kennedy….
^nice closer

Overall good battle, found good balance in your vocab: not too complex and not too basic either.Had some nice punches in there, good wordplay and such. The last bar was cool personal, your flow was good as well as your structure


Julius Revees


...It Doesn't Take Much For Me To Get My Point Across...Cuz ''Heads Will Roll''... Like A Bad Coin Toss...
^nice wordplay, no real punch though

Truth Never Played A Part Of U....U Dumb & U's A Lier...So Watch Me Put A End ''Mad Knight''... (M.C. Knight)...Like Bombin Tupac's Driver...
^hehe, coo coo

Don't Play With Me...Sene ''It's Not A Game''...U'll Think N.O.R.E.'s Here...& I'm Known For Dropppin More ''Knights'' Than Accient Warriors
^good closer

Okay battle, first bar wasn't really a punch but the wordplay was nice though.The rest were some cool punches, attempted personals with playing his name and such. Vocab was dope as well as your flow but fix your structure because it's harder to read.

In the end my vote goes to MaD_KnighT because I feel he stayed more consistent with the punches, Julius Reeves had some nice stuff in there too but the structure was kinda off for me.
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Old 04-10-05, 12:48 PM   #17
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V/Julius Revees....this was a good battle but jul got this his was short but hot his punchs were on an good vocab an personals...Mad u had a good verse but ur punchs were played to basic an vocab was ight.....NO HATE>>>RETURN THE FAVOR....
opner=j
closer=j
Punchs=J
Structure=m
vocab=j
personals=j
overall=Julius Revees
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Old 04-10-05, 05:24 PM   #18
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Voted For: MaD_KnighT

votin for Mad

Mad got this cuz he came with alot more punches n had a creative approach to his verse

flow was good mad
strucutre was good as well
personals- they was ight
multies - didnt see any
punches- hot hot hot

Julius ya verse didnt consit of many hard punches
strucutre- was off fam elevate on that
flow- descent flow
multies- didnt see any
personals- didnt see any
punches- weak fam elevate on harder punches

i like mad punches they were hard hittin in to the point he also had some perosnals tht i liked as well

good battle fams

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