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Old 04-20-05, 04:01 PM   #16
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Voted For: SoLo

weak battle.....

genereic disease-

im like an airplane except when I "land" a punch your eyes-pop instead of your ears
suddenly you fall to the ground people crowd around your eyes are re(a)d with tears
not feelin it.....2/10
battling noobs cause your greedy until you lose cause you know, you’ll never beat-me
could never defeat me being my personal butcher is the only way you would “meet me”(meet or meat)
weak........2/10
only way you could put me in a coma is with a decent auroma but since you stink that’s not gonna happen
keep it to your self hang your career up on a shelf don’t you notice noones clappin you need to quit rappin
poor structure.....weak punch...1/10
im gonna rip-you like a wet tissue and both of us know that noone will miss-you cause your wack
there’s no returning, cause your not worth burning take out a pen and start learning cause you cant come back
weak punch...terrible structure..bad flow...1/10

OVERALL SCORE-6/40(15%)

Solo-

Beggin To Be In LS..Ya Ass Is Actin Like A Hoe The Way U On Ya Knees…
Even Ya So-Called Illness Is Basic..Don’t Wanna Catch That Generic Disease…*
decent personal...4/10
Can’t Spit Hard Shit..Ya Lines Packin Nuthin But Fluff Like Bathroom Towels…
Dawg Face It Ya Rhymes Stink..Even You Said Every Vowel You Spit Is Foul…*
str8 personal......5/10
Drop A Filler Line To Help..I Know U One Of Those Who Don’t Believe-In-Us…
But I Ain’t Gotta Be Smart To Win..Notice He’s Only Optimistically A Genius…*
not feelin it....3/10
I Just Got Personal On Ya..Now I’m A Switch Style Like Rocky In Number 3…
Dude Loves Nature..Named “Woodpecker Dick” The Way U Humpin Trees…
nah..........2/10
I’m Gonna Put Colour To This Line To Compensate For Your Fuckin Dull Spit…
Think You Gone Win Battles Wit Multies..Thats Just More Times The Bull Shit…
decent......6/10
To Finish You Off I’m Gonna Give Ya Hope..Check It I’ll Spit A Basic Rhyme…
Step Up, We Tossin Clocks In Bins..Cuz Battlin You Is Just Me Wastin Time…
Played.....0/10

OVERALL SCORE-20/60(33.3%)

yall boiz need to elevate..................
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Old 04-20-05, 04:05 PM   #17
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lol @ disease changing his sig after reading solo's 3rd personal...good bitch move

word.....
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Old 04-20-05, 08:56 PM   #18
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Huh? What personal I didn't even read his verse, so fuck you.
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Old 04-21-05, 01:07 AM   #19
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Voted For: SoLo

solo:
Beggin To Be In LS..Ya Ass Is Actin Like A Hoe The Way U On Ya Knees…
Even Ya So-Called Illness Is Basic..Don’t Wanna Catch That Generic Disease…*
^^GOOD PERSONAL/OPENER..BUT I DIDN'T LIKE HOW DIS RYHMED
Can’t Spit Hard Shit..Ya Lines Packin Nuthin But Fluff Like Bathroom Towels…
Dawg Face It Ya Rhymes Stink..Even You Said Every Vowel You Spit Is Foul…*
^^^OKAY...CUOLD OF USE IT A LIL BETTA
Drop A Filler Line To Help..I Know U One Of Those Who Don’t Believe-In-Us…
But I Ain’t Gotta Be Smart To Win..Notice He’s Only Optimistically A Genius…*
^^^GOOD PERSONAL
I Just Got Personal On Ya..Now I’m A Switch Style Like Rocky In Number 3…
Dude Loves Nature..Named “Woodpecker Dick” The Way U Humpin Trees…
^^^LOL...FUNNY SHIT
I’m Gonna Put Colour To This Line To Compensate For Your Fuckin Dull Spit…
Think You Gone Win Battles Wit Multies..Thats Just More Times The Bull Shit…
^^^WASN'T FEELIN DA SECOND LINE
To Finish You Off I’m Gonna Give Ya Hope..Check It I’ll Spit A Basic Rhyme…
Step Up, We Tossin Clocks In Bins..Cuz Battlin You Is Just Me Wastin Time…
^^^OKAY...EVERY1 DONE FLIP DIS LINE BUT HEY

disease:
im like an airplane except when I "land" a punch your eyes-pop instead of your ears
suddenly you fall to the ground people crowd around your eyes are re(a)d with tears
^^^NO
battling noobs cause your greedy until you lose cause you know, you’ll never beat-me
could never defeat me being my personal butcher is the only way you would “meet me”(meet or meat)
^^^^DA WHOL SET UP 4 DA "MEET ME" LINE MADE IT WACK AND IT WAS MADD LONG
only way you could put me in a coma is with a decent auroma but since you stink that’s not gonna happen
keep it to your self hang your career up on a shelf don’t you notice noones clappin you need to quit rappin
^^^^A WEAK ATTEMPT AT USIN A MULTI
im gonna rip-you like a wet tissue and both of us know that noone will miss-you cause your wack
there’s no returning, cause your not worth burning take out a pen and start learning cause you cant come back
^^^OMG....IT TOOK ME 5 MINUTES DA GET 2 DA END OF DIS BAR LOL...

V/SOLO.....WAY MORE CONSISTANT AND HE HAD PERSONALS
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Old 04-21-05, 11:34 AM   #20
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aight gud votin people................keep em comin *BUMP*

uppin for da win hoez!!!!!!
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Old 04-21-05, 11:43 AM   #21
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LMFAO, GOOD VOTING,?? Honestly, you won, but this is shit voting, no one gets that if you have multis in your verse, your lines can be stretched, so fuck all the voters.
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Old 04-21-05, 03:54 PM   #22
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but ur multies are garbage...and maybe u should read his 3rd personal...and dunt worry...u have potential...so fuck you
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Old 04-21-05, 09:10 PM   #23
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Voted For: generic disease

this battle was real close. both the punches were pretty weak but solo i like how u got real creative with tha verse and added color and said bout ok here goes a one lined filler that was good plus u had some personals. generic disease u had a good flow i didnt think it would work cause the lines were so long but u worked it in good with multis u had some good play on words and a couple good personals. overall ur punches r what got u the vote cause overall they were a little more clever and funnier, but it was real close
 
Old 04-22-05, 05:33 AM   #24
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.....................*BUMP*....................... damn u DON takin away my KO!!!!
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Old 04-22-05, 12:11 PM   #25
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......................................*bump*...... ................................
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Old 04-22-05, 04:37 PM   #26
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.............................*bump Hoez*.................................
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Old 04-23-05, 08:23 AM   #27
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.......................*hump This Ma'fucka*.......................
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Old 04-23-05, 08:41 AM   #28
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Voted For: SoLo

on sided to me, generics verse want bad, solo just cam harder.


solo you had some nice punche in there.
To Finish You Off I’m Gonna Give Ya Hope..Check It I’ll Spit A Basic Rhyme…
Step Up, We Tossin Clocks In Bins..Cuz Battlin You Is Just Me Wastin Time…
^kinda played but still nice.

Overall nice personals and punches won you this.

disease, i was feelin a few of your punches but to connect harder you need to word them better.
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