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Old 05-13-05, 05:23 PM   #16
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This was feedback posted for Aurora Sky

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tahaa sum funny shyt yo...im feelin ya verse B

"Im to sick, ill abuse this dude quick, and he 'cant see me', cuz his visions' blocked by them huge lips!/
Bones' a feeble bitch, ill beat em quick, and i thought his verse was something to laugh at, until i seen his pic/"

^^Game ova right derr..u ended dude...props due
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Old 05-13-05, 05:46 PM   #17
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Voted For: Aurora Sky

aight, simple......aurora had better punches......he incorporated personals that were effective.....i dunno bone, your verse was weak, first 4lines all you did was tell everyone he is kronus.....but didn't diss him.....aurora, your lines/structure was fucked up man, at times it was very hard to follow, just work on that and you should get back into the groove, kinda just played with two concepts the whole time, so mix it up more, word......anyways, this was one sided, aurora for having effective punhces........but he'll win this anyways, bone only wrote 8 lines

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Old 05-18-05, 01:20 AM   #18
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Old 05-21-05, 02:43 AM   #19
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Voted For: Bonecollector

Im to sick, ill abuse this dude quick, and he 'cant see me', cuz his visions' blocked by them huge lips!/
Well, it woulda been dope if that was him, weak personal, 1-10
Bones' a feeble bitch, ill beat em quick, and i thought his verse was something to laugh at, until i seen his pic/
laughing with the wind, thats not him. 1-10
This kid is nothing, says he nice but he simply suckin', you need to quit rap, like u need a lip reduction/
Whos picture is this, not his.. 1-10
Ima vandal, watch ya flow get dismantled, why'd the council let you in?, while i was gone they must have lowered the standards/
no rhyming nothing, u suck. 1-10
Get it straight, im steady poppin this dude, you not hot your a fool, and ya verse is a perfect example of why you got dropped from ya crew
No your not, your poppin off at a picture u found on the net. 1-10


You taken me down , is more difficult then finding your Alias Name ...
Ha okay opener makes your cerious who he really is.. 5-10
But its a shame , i already know who you were before you hit me up on aim..
lacking vocab, okay flow, slacking though.. 4-10
Kronuz i had to reveal you , and your new account..
nice but need to work on vocab but flowed ok 6-10
Cus you can merge your two names and still not compare to my body count..
Come on are you trying 5-10
Krounz im making you look like the system with a 0-1 record..
HaHa thats funny since 01´s makes computer programs, nice. 6.5-10
Cus making a new name isnt gonna get you fame, your still ignored..
or dissing the wrong man.. 5-10
I Told him to set it up post ina an hour, but he makes it 15..
acture you said 15 after check in 2-10
Are you bad at math or just a mentally challegened tee
n?..
okay closer, coulda been better. 5-10

Well, its this was a easy battle. I mean Aurora Sky woulda won if that was actually BONE but nope, I hate it when people come with fake personals. So my Vote is Bonecollector.
But you need to work on wordplay and vocab, or move to audio cuz even when you come simple it sounds dope as long as the story you tell is worth hearing. Look at Pac. Nice battle from the both of you!

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Old 05-21-05, 11:28 AM   #20
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Old 05-23-05, 03:48 AM   #21
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Old 05-24-05, 12:02 AM   #22
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Old 05-25-05, 01:10 AM   #23
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Voted For: Bonecollector

v/diagnosis

he had better punches,nice wordplay,dope opener and a nioce strong ending to close it,the structure i felt was more readable and better formatted also..plus he had more sufficient personals...

Aurora
you had a few personals also but not damaging in my book...you could of been more creative,your srtucture was decent not bad but okay....,the flow was blah,decent personals...

anyways bonecollecter came hard and strong while airora came decent....

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Old 05-25-05, 05:07 AM   #24
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Voted For: Bonecollector

aiight good battle yo.. aurora u need to improve ur structure a bit.. lets get into it....

diagnosis - ok, your verse was decent... your opener was a nice personal, your closer was pretty sick... your whole verse flowed very well didnt fall off point... your punches and personals were good and structure was good a few lines were stretched but good... you need to up on ur vocabulary a bit more but overall good verse.. nice creativity..

Aurora - your verse was more simple, your lines were stretched as hell mayne, you had some good punches but not as many as diagnosis... your verse flowed well apart from near the middle where it fell off att times... your vocab was ok but like i said to diagnosis u need to up it... and ur creativty was aiight...

opener - D
closer - A
flow - D
punches - D
vocab - Tie
structure - D
creativity - D
vote - D, no hate just how i saw it
 
 


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