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05-16-05, 03:05 PM
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IP: B48F 5388
do u muthafuckaz vote on here?........................................
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05-16-05, 05:07 PM
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This was feedback posted for _JooKsta_
IP: 5F34 5051
your jawnt was pretty nice....but, he had a better finisher...
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05-16-05, 08:29 PM
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IP: 323F E2B9
Voted For: CeleriTy
Celerity-- Text so small...lol..nah but your verse flowed good, creative in parts, punches were ok.... Jooksta-- Multis were ok, though i hate the way u write ur shit hurts my eyes man, flow was ok, and punches were alright... Punches-- Tie Flow- Celerity Multis- Jooksta Structure-- Tie Creativity-- Celerity Wordplay-- Jooksta Metaphors-- Celerity Final Vote----- Celerity...... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-16-05, 08:36 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 11E2 4814
Voted For: _JooKsta_
Aii Man This Is what I Think Aii .. Joksta Niec drop Man You came Very nice with exceptions of your first bar Bcuz that one wasnt all dat but all the rest were on Q Far as I can Tell all You need to Do Is Str8en Out Ya Structure a Lil Bit More And Then Leave All Those Lil ~!@## Marks outta Ya Verse Then You will Be str8 Man Celerity Aii Man Jus becuase your verse Was in red doesnt mean it will be on fir LOL J/k Man You dropped very nice and I thin kYou Wouldve had this battle if you wouldntve Let Go of that Strong verse you Was Dropping fdrom Teh begining Man ......Sp Im Sorry Ima Have to give it to the other guy SOryy No Hate man You Nice RTF In the battle link i8n my Sig pleas Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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05-19-05, 02:29 PM
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..::God Of Destruction::..
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IP: B48F 5388
upin dis fuckin battle for votes.................................
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05-26-05, 06:45 PM
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*Im'a Hustla*
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IP: 28A8 B6DC
upping nicca............................................. ...
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06-01-05, 12:52 PM
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.::Outside The Circle::.
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IP: 9676 FA92
Voted For: CeleriTy
alrite man let me break this down... Celerity- your font was really hard to read.. and most of ur punches were multi-use.. but your flow stayed on the whole way thru.. and the structure was alright. Jooksta- you really need to work on writing harder hitting punches. you had some but they were really basic and they werent anything that really caught the eye. your structure was the most annoying thing i have ever read.. but beside that decent for a beginner. Vote. Celerity for harder hitting punches and an easier to read structure.. no hate.. elevate
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