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Old 06-16-05, 07:06 PM   #16
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Voted For: RobKilla

this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on?
he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small
you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this
ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist
vs.
Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger...
Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger
^^
only lines i liked so goin by that rob wins.... no hate

spek- saw that u didn't and dropped quick because i dont think u even had one bar with wordplay in ya whole verse...

rob- those two lines were good wordplay but the punches didn't really hit very hard... need to work on that... spek might win this cuz he threw more punches, but i can tell u put more effort into this and came more creative.

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Old 06-18-05, 03:39 PM   #17
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This was feedback posted for RobKilla

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Old 06-22-05, 11:23 AM   #18
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Old 06-23-05, 08:53 AM   #19
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul

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Old 07-12-05, 07:35 AM   #20
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Old 07-17-05, 12:07 AM   #21
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Old 07-18-05, 05:00 AM   #22
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Old 07-23-05, 02:04 AM   #23
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Robkilla
his occupation's beatin "city pussy," whats the word with that
his rec's hyped up from killin newbs, he only deals wit HERBin cats
Bad wordplay and bad personal.
wanna be a spektikul on RV when you know we all hate you
and to acheive this, you come one K short of a hate group
Bad rhyme, blah punch.
you couldn't catch up to my cash flow if we crossed earnings
cuz beatin me is like catchin the holy ghost at one of your cross burnings
Bad punch. He's not in the KKK. Get over it.
this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on?
he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small
Ok personal.
you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this
ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist
No. Absolutely not.

Your punch attempts and personals suck. I'm sorry, but this was a bad verse. You had one ok personal, but other then that it was completely random punches and personals. Bad punches on that.

Spektikul
Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger...
Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger
Haha, ok personal on his av.
This wiggers just pussy, how you supposed to leave me dead
He'd only be harmful, bringing a needle into this thread
Eh...bad wording. Personal is blah too.
Scared to show hes an herb, his records at eleven and one
First vet that he battled, was the first time he got sonned
Um, not really a personal or punch.
Will this kid drop us a verse, Ill be surprised to be honest
Cause hes only got 500 posts...and been here since Augest
No. Bad punch.
You leave everyone yawning, cause your the sillyest whore
Spek just flipped you, now we know Rob is really a Bor
Haha, ok wordplay punch. Hint of self glorification though.

Overall, not your best verse. Weak personals and punches mostly. You had two bars I liked, which won it for you. Be more consistent.

Vote goes to Spek for actually having two punches that hit compared to RK who had nothing.

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Old 07-24-05, 12:02 AM   #24
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Old 07-24-05, 01:12 PM   #25
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Old 07-25-05, 01:08 PM   #26
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Old 07-26-05, 02:15 AM   #27
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Old 07-28-05, 12:14 PM   #28
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Old 07-30-05, 02:30 PM   #29
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Upping to endddddd.............
 
Old 08-01-05, 03:00 PM   #30
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