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IP: 3EC9 2F38
Voted For: RobKilla
this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on? he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist vs. Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger... Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger ^^ only lines i liked so goin by that rob wins.... no hate spek- saw that u didn't and dropped quick because i dont think u even had one bar with wordplay in ya whole verse... rob- those two lines were good wordplay but the punches didn't really hit very hard... need to work on that... spek might win this cuz he threw more punches, but i can tell u put more effort into this and came more creative. honest vote here... return one... links in sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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This was feedback posted for RobKilla
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rattataaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa attttttttttttt
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
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GG Haterz
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IP: 46F5 4B30
Voted For: Spektikul
Robkilla his occupation's beatin "city pussy," whats the word with that his rec's hyped up from killin newbs, he only deals wit HERBin cats Bad wordplay and bad personal. wanna be a spektikul on RV when you know we all hate you and to acheive this, you come one K short of a hate group Bad rhyme, blah punch. you couldn't catch up to my cash flow if we crossed earnings cuz beatin me is like catchin the holy ghost at one of your cross burnings Bad punch. He's not in the KKK. Get over it. this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on? he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small Ok personal. you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist No. Absolutely not. Your punch attempts and personals suck. I'm sorry, but this was a bad verse. You had one ok personal, but other then that it was completely random punches and personals. Bad punches on that. Spektikul Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger... Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger Haha, ok personal on his av. This wiggers just pussy, how you supposed to leave me dead He'd only be harmful, bringing a needle into this thread Eh...bad wording. Personal is blah too. Scared to show hes an herb, his records at eleven and one First vet that he battled, was the first time he got sonned Um, not really a personal or punch. Will this kid drop us a verse, Ill be surprised to be honest Cause hes only got 500 posts...and been here since Augest No. Bad punch. You leave everyone yawning, cause your the sillyest whore Spek just flipped you, now we know Rob is really a Bor Haha, ok wordplay punch. Hint of self glorification though. Overall, not your best verse. Weak personals and punches mostly. You had two bars I liked, which won it for you. Be more consistent. Vote goes to Spek for actually having two punches that hit compared to RK who had nothing. v- Spektikul
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